My Expedition

[nissanse98]

In the beginning, there were large mountains, rapid fast moving lines of animals, indigenous tribes, and much weird tasting fruit. This is where my story begins. I emerge from a small tunnel into a weird strange world as was just described. I start walking out of my tunnel and into a jungle. A greenish blue fluffy substance surrounds me. Never have

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[ktbug_3]

About time... it was looking pretty rough after some scavenger went through it and searched for the few valuable items that were hidden away.

better? :-P

let me count the ways

[anonymous]

so, when i told you that you should post more, this is not what i had in mind....and oh, sad sad day....look at all these grammatical mistakes!! My favorite is "before he PAST on". Haha -- silly Stephen....maybe you should type it in WORD (for spellcheck) before posting. :) ~what then!!

[nissanse98]

thank you..you old hag of an english teacher

[anonymous]

You're welcome, you ingrate fool of a student. Maybe you would learn a little proper English if you didn't sit in the back row making up less than amusing, adjective-ridden stories that end up stating a thought that could have been expressed in a single sentence.