Ok I have another song......

[niteowl_ninja]

I wrote this song and got some feedback. All positive but it made someone cry. IF you have a faint heart do not read. J/K Enjoy at you're own risk

Comments

[dobsonhottie]

hun thats amazing i almost cryed but i stoped reading it before i could you have a great talent. thank you for all you have done for me your an awesome friend

[yahooeykablooey]

I like your stuff. We should hang out sometime. I wrote a new song tonight too called Faded:

Faded memories
Broken past
Tried real hard
Tried too fast
15 minutes
I go again
Same ole' same ole'
Tell me when

The mask I wear
The words I make
Scattered images
A life to take
They come and go
I don't go too
Living for today
Is all I do

Keep on going
Don't look back
You're doing good
It doesn't lack
What to do
What to say
Who will listen
Who will pray

Happy shadows
Bittersweet
A new horizon
Once thought complete
Day by day
Night by night
Out of mind
Out of sight

For all the sadness
And all the pain
I come out stronger
With all I gain
For all of this
And all before
I will live proudly
Forever more

Wow

[niteowl_ninja]

that song is really good.