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The Things We Just Don't See

Apr 12, 2010 19:10

Title: The Things We Just Don’t See
Author:njrv16
Rating: PG
Pairing/Focus:Jinki/Kibum (Onkey)
Disclaimer: I don’t even own my car how do you expect for me to own human beings XD
Summary: One day Kibum bumps into a really charming but different boy. (Lame!! I know, I just don't know what to write)

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pairing: onew/key, !fanfic, author: n, rating: pg

Comments 26

ringdingdong19 April 12 2010, 23:33:48 UTC

Spot!

ringdingdong19 April 15 2010, 00:23:11 UTC

i finally get to read this XDDD
and this is very beautiful and amazing :'D
jinki is too perfect :3
probably one of the best onkey i've read this week~!

keep writing, yes?
<333

njrv16 April 19 2010, 00:10:32 UTC

LOL congrats for the spot XD

Thanks so much for reading and commenting. It makes me really happy to know that people like what I write.

I'll keep writing just that at snail speed XD and sorry for the late reply.

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njrv16 April 19 2010, 00:11:21 UTC

Thank you very much for commenting!!! ^_^

hyukielove April 13 2010, 01:48:55 UTC

omg that was SO SO SO cute & adorable <333!! Usually people lose their characters when they're writing this type of fic , but you totally kept the onew sangtae alivee!!<3

njrv16 April 19 2010, 00:17:11 UTC

Thanks so much for liking it :D
Really?! Ohh wow I feel flattered you think I keep on character.

Of course I had to write some Onew sangtae XD he never fails to make me smile on shows.

Thanks for commenting.

rinni1905 April 13 2010, 02:30:02 UTC

Wah,this fic is really cute and so heart-touching. I can totally feel Jinki and Kibum's love here. And I'm glad that they have a very happy ending...

I feel so blessed that someone wrote a very cute fanfic about Onkey, I'm very much Onkey-deprived nowadays. Thank you, and keep writing, because you're really good.

njrv16 April 19 2010, 00:24:22 UTC

Thanks for the comment!! ;D

Ohh I know about the Onkey deprived problem, In my case is more extreme this few weeks I'm always busy and never have a chance to read but this idea just came and I couldn't help myself.
Think on the bright side there's that awesome Onkey moment a few days ago in HB special episode XD
I still can't bring myself to write them with a sad ending, I adore them together ;D

mumuja April 13 2010, 02:55:09 UTC

wow!!!
i really liked this!!
soo cute OnKey!!
thank you for sharing!

njrv16 April 19 2010, 00:25:30 UTC

No problem ;D

Thank you for reading and thank you so much more for leaving a comment <3