Not Exactly a First Kiss (One-shot)

Nov 29, 2009 14:15

Title: Not Exactly a First Kiss

Pairing: Onkey

Rating: PG-15 (I think) for implied sex

Disclaimer: I don’t own them and never will, if I did Onew and Key would be doing shameless fan service 24/7 XD

Summary: Kibum has just figure something out regarding Jinki and wants to deal with it as fast as he can so he makes up a plan but things don’t really go ( Read more... )

author: njrv16, pairing: onew/key, livejournal, !fanfic, rating: pg-15

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xxqod November 29 2009, 19:54:46 UTC
LOL!
Jonghyun being again way too jonghuyn XD
Minho is serious fun XD

Key for blurting out he likes Jinki is soo funny
I love their relationship ^^
Even if your grammar isn't good it's understandable. I have the same problem, but it gets better with time ^^

<3 ~~

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njrv16 November 29 2009, 21:12:43 UTC
Thanks a lot :D I'm glad it's understandable.

Somehow I get the feeling that Key unconsciously would confess like that.

Yeah practice makes everything better if t weren't for school and reading fanfics my english would be a lot worst.

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njrv16 November 30 2009, 04:47:04 UTC
Aww Thanks a lot it means a lot to me you liked it :D

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read0write November 30 2009, 01:03:14 UTC
lol jonghyun just always ruins the moment XD
aww key and onew were adorable lol
minho was...i don't know what to say exactly...

onkey love ♥

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njrv16 November 30 2009, 04:50:15 UTC
Thanks for reading!!
Yeah Minho is 'special' here
Like when quiet people suddenly start talking more than usual causing the people around them to get a little scared.

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juphen November 30 2009, 03:15:24 UTC
Jonghyun OMG..so adorable
Minho?? I can't believe that he has an idea for onkey stuff

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njrv16 November 30 2009, 04:52:11 UTC
It's impossible not to love Jonghyun or any member from Shinee as a matter of fact.

Like they say 'It's always the quiet ones' XD

Thanks for reading :D

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onewpie November 30 2009, 05:28:18 UTC
OMG I liked this so much!! :3
onkey was so sweet <3 and i love the straightforward Onew soo much... so sexy <3

Btw, where do you live? :D
i live in Mexico and i LOOOVE Sin bandera <3
have you heard noel's new single? it is so awesomeee :D

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njrv16 November 30 2009, 10:32:30 UTC
Glad you liked it :D

I'm from Puerto Rico!!
and yes I have hear Noel's new single and I LOVE it, my roommate and I put in the car really loudly and we just go into our own little world singing along XD. Noel has such a nice, calming voice.

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rinni1905 November 30 2009, 05:05:23 UTC
It's really cute :X

I love how childish Jonghyun in here and certainly, our cute adorable Onkey :X

Love this ^^

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njrv16 November 30 2009, 10:35:23 UTC
Thanks a lot!!! :D
Onkey is most likely the cutest thing ever XD I hope they spend their time together more often, there's way to much Jongkey around.

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