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Fic: Clean Underwear

Jul 28, 2008 22:00

Title: Clean Underwear
Fandom: NEWS
Word Count: 1100+
Rating: G
Summary: Shige occasionally meets new people at the laundromat. In which Shige meets a laundry novice. [AU | ShigePi]
Notes: Can be read as friendship or more. I need to stop writing fic during my breaks at work.

( It's nearing eight in the evening on a Saturday night when Shige gets to the laundromat a few blocks from his apartment building to do his weekly wash. )

p: yamapi/shige, length: oneshot, *fanfic, f: johnny's entertainment

Comments 25

resolute_reader July 29 2008, 07:29:37 UTC

It kind of felt like the contented sigh of someone about to do something new. It that makes any sense . . .

It was such a nice ending I love that type of ending; a really simple sentence or just one word.

I'm kind of wondering if he put the detergent in right x)

nkiseki July 30 2008, 03:13:19 UTC

Thanks!

I usually really like that sort of ending too... because it leaves the reader thinking something could potentially come after it, but not necessarily.

The directions are on boxes! How can anyone possibly mess thaat up? XD

roughmetal2 July 29 2008, 08:07:23 UTC

i read this without checking out the pairing. at first, i thought it was a nishikato but i noticed that the other guy didn't act like ryo. he was nice XD. so i looked up the pairing again and saw that it was a shigepi. no misgivings though coz the fic is nice XD.

nkiseki July 30 2008, 03:19:06 UTC

Haha... I'm sorry? ^^ Can I ask what made you think it was going to be NishiKato, cos I'm kind of curious? XD I somehow can't ever seem to finish writing NishiKato fics (probably because there are so many good authors out there and I feel kind of inferior when I try to write them -_-;;), but ShigePi comes easier for me, I'm not sure why. I'm glad you didn't think the fic was terrible though. ^^

roughmetal2 July 31 2008, 07:38:08 UTC

hahaha honestly i don't know what made me think of nishikato. perhaps, i'm just too engrossed on that pairing (not to mention that there are really lots of wonderful nishikato fics these days) that i just assumed that this is about shige and ryo too XD. but since you write well, i believe you can pull off a nice nishikato if you want XD. yet, like what i said, shigepi is okay so can we expect more of this pairing from you? XD

sumomo_yuki July 29 2008, 13:03:40 UTC

its nice and i can soo imagine pi trying to push and stuff everything in XDD

nkiseki July 30 2008, 03:19:28 UTC

Thanks for reading!

fireflychen July 29 2008, 22:15:27 UTC

Shigepi! :)

That was a wonderful story!♥ Yamapi strangely reminded me of my little brother the way he tried to put everything in one machine... xD Lol

nkiseki July 30 2008, 03:22:41 UTC

They need more love. *is sadden by lack of ShigePi love in fandom*

Thank you! Haha, Yamapi's kind of like a big kid sometimes to me, so I write him like that. Though I'm not sure how I feel about him reminding you of your brother XD

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nkiseki July 31 2008, 05:22:19 UTC

Thank you.