Fic: Undefined

Oct 26, 2008 21:53

Title: Undefined
Fandom: NEWS
Word Count: 1100+
Rating: PG (Maybe PG13? I've no clue)
Summary: It wasn't a relationship; not really... Shige didn't know what they were. [Ryo/Shige]
Notes: It's been so long since I've written anything, but... happy birthday, trivialaffair! I destroyed your prompt. Twice. And with bad writing. I'm not sure what I wrote actually ( Read more... )

length: oneshot, f: johnny's entertainment, p: ryo/shige

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shangrilove October 27 2008, 05:07:37 UTC
TRIV JUST WENT TO BED A MINUTE AGO. ALDKFJA;LSKFJAS

Anyways, this was super cute and akdfj;akd the relationship (or lack of) leaves me slightly sad. but good for shige for making an effort. ryo better meet him halfway.

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nkiseki October 27 2008, 05:18:36 UTC
Haha, I know! I just saw her sign offline a few minutes ago XD I kept thinking "gotta post before her birthday is over!" But it took me an hour to do the title and summary and at the end I just thought, "forget it! Hello cop out title!" I don't care anymore, it's not even midnight where I live yet so ner on her =P *is being horribly childish*

And thanks! I was trying something new in terms of style, and writing depressing fic is my weakest skill so I'm kind of glad it made you a little sad. ^^;;

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fairy_illusions October 27 2008, 06:26:07 UTC
askjldghksldhf Ryo and Shigeeeeee. They seriously need a definition in a dictionary. lol But then too many words make the awesomeness that is Nishikato. XD May I demand ask nicely for more RyoShige plus a hint of egostical!Tegoshi hahaha It's fun :D

Seeing these fics for Triv reminds me that I've abandoned posting her fic for the sake of homework. [sigh] Tomorrow, when I have time, I fic-spam her. -_- For now, I must complete my homework (RyoShige distracts me from work too often. Especially fic.)

PS: I DON'T KNOW WHAT YOU'RE TALKING ABOUT. THIS IS A GREAT FIC lol

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nkiseki October 27 2008, 06:46:49 UTC
They do! They're kind of special like that. Ah, I always seem to hate my portrayal of Ryo/Shige. I can't write romance very well if at all. D=

I finished my midterm ones Friday and have another two weeks before I'm testing again so I completely sympathize with the "abandon for the sake of school" thing.

IT REALLY ISN'T! NOW THAT I'M READING IT OVER, I SEE SO MANY TECHNICAL ERRORS AND PARAGRAPHS THAT I JUST WANT TO REWRITE! This goes to show me that I shouldn't do things last minute.

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praghufanfic October 27 2008, 12:17:23 UTC
adgjhfgireg. Might i say, that this was AMAZING. I loved it. My heart broke a bit for Shige, but i love the hope in the last sentence.
And the 'extra' bit was hilarious! Thank you!

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nkiseki October 27 2008, 17:41:51 UTC
Thank you so much! This is far from amazing T_T I need to do better and try again.
I don't know how to convey depressing themes in fic so it makes me glad that other people got that. =)

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catskilt October 27 2008, 16:15:50 UTC
This was a great read, thank you :D
Though I have to admit I liked the TegoShige bit at the end best <3 Silly TegoShige totally wins.

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nkiseki October 27 2008, 17:45:45 UTC
Thanks!
TegoShige is kind of awesome, isn't it? ^^ I would totally write them more if a friend of mine didn't go "TEGO'S TWELVE!" at me all the time. My excuse with this was "it's meant to be read as friendship!!!1"

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catskilt October 27 2008, 17:51:20 UTC
TegoShige is all kinds of awesome and they're not written half enough and you should totally write them :P Twelve or not XD

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nkiseki October 27 2008, 18:04:21 UTC
Argh! Don't tempt me! *headdesk* I wouldn't even know where to begin.

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ayumwu October 27 2008, 16:46:38 UTC
lakjdsf;lasjfd Ryo's being a bitch. As usual. D: Domo-kun is maaaaaaad.

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nkiseki October 27 2008, 17:48:36 UTC
Hahaha! Bitch!Ryo is easy for me to write ^^ Aw, Domo-kun, don't be mad; You'll kill that DS! If Ryo doesn't behave, Arthur and Lancelot will go fight for Shige =D

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ayumwu October 27 2008, 21:03:17 UTC
LOL that's 'cause he IS one. D:

LOL I love that icon ♥ Domo-kun rocks my socks. ♥

Lol, Shige's knights in shining armour~~~~ Taller than Ryo, too. XDDD

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nkiseki October 28 2008, 04:31:23 UTC
Hahaha, but he's supposed to be a shy bitch!

They really are taller than Ryo! Someone should write that, Shige, Knights and height complex Ryo. ^^

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