Comments | nkiseki: Greetings From A Stranger

nkiseki

Greetings From A Stranger

Aug 26, 2005 22:25

( For as long as Sasuke could remember, the girl greeted him every morning at the train station. )

Comments 6

Hinata/Sasuke anonymous November 21 2005, 09:41:16 UTC

I like this fiction. I also read your other 2 fiction on FF.net. You should write more Hinata/Sasuke fiction.

You should write a part 2 for Greetings From A Stranger.

sefiroto May 15 2006, 02:21:57 UTC

I agree it was quite choppy, and the sentences didn't quite build up the mood for the ending, but that's my only nitpick. ^^ Other than that, it was great. ^^ I like the idea of Sasuke unconsciously looking forward to seeing Hinata on the train. ^^

This story reminds me of Jostein Gaarder's The Orange Girl. ^^

nkiseki May 15 2006, 03:19:42 UTC

I've never Jostein Gaarder before. Maybe I should ^^

And yeah... I don't think I ever really got into Defoe that much to actually like his writing. XD Not that he's not a good writer, just not one of my favorites.

lems_sama May 18 2006, 11:36:38 UTC

hey XD nice fiction XD !
I just love this pairing lol
you should post this on ff.net or you already did it ? lol if so sorry and can you pass me the link ?

ooh and if you happen to own a deviantart account you're more than welcome to join the sasuhina-fc.deviantart.com

anyway, keep up the great work :)

nkiseki May 18 2006, 19:40:40 UTC

OMG, Lems-sama!!! XD I love your work!!! I wish I had drawing talents but I don't ><

Heh; actually, I do have a ff.net account. But I have to really like what I write to put it up there; otherwise, I feel inferior ><. This LJ is for my rejected works or WIP fics. Besides... this fic really isn't good enough for ff.net

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nkiseki May 20 2006, 01:11:19 UTC

Hehe; thank you. No drabble follow-up... I'll leave what happens to your imagination.