Fic: That'd be all Ms. Potts

[nm42]

Title: That's Be All Ms. Potts
Pairing: Tony/Pepper
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 1086
Summary: He chuckled. “Getting ‘The Legend’ with an arrow pointing down would be a bit predictable”.
Disclaimer: No it is not mine so...quit rubbin' it in!

Pepper made her way down the steps and stopped short to enter her number. From behind the glass she watched as Tony

Comments

[silentpheonix]

I find your lack of period usage disturbing.

[nm42]

Um...in what part?

[silentpheonix]

Nearly every time someone says something that is not a question.

"If you weren’t"

"First of all" he said stopping her with a finger, "That’s already more then one you could never state multiple adjectives without warning me before hand, it’s just unconstitutional"

"Yes Pepper"

"I advise you to be quiet"

"Oh Pepper, kinky...I like it"

"You have a meeting at 5"

etc.

[nm42]

Oh...

Wow...completely forgot about that. I usually just jot some ideas down on notepad, write the rest down and edit. I posted this somewhat late and been on the tired side lately. But no your right, that was fairly stupid of me not to notice.

Thank you for pointing that out!

[4persephone]

Interesting chapter and concept. It's always nice to see Pepper show a fair bit of spine both in and out of the office. I liked the visceral impact of this story....

is this going to be a one shot or will we get more parts to see your take on thier relationship as a whole...

[nm42]

Thank you.

And I planned on just leaving this as a one shot, have a idea floating around involving these 2, might write it based on this might not. I havent completely decided.

But thank you for taking the time to review :)

[crazyasslizzy]

Funny and a great concept, loved it. Are you going to write a second chapter?

[nm42]

Ah might, might not.

And thanks Liz!