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[no_dammit]

so I am retyping my script and I dont know how it really is. Every time I finish prof reading the pages I have a good feeling about it but hwne I start reading it again it just doesnt seem right. I don't know. I guess I need some fresh eyes. So who is willing to read this script to tell me how it really is? Whoever wants to can. I just need some

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[scruffpuff]

uh I don't quite understand the log line....i'll read it if you want but be prepared for hardcore criticism if it is warranted.