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Sep 23, 2009 11:40

It amazes me.
You warm my heart, and my soul.
For that, I thank you.

...That's not good at all. Ill try again later.

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makesyoucoffee September 23 2009, 18:41:12 UTC
I-I think it's very good! Do you like to write?

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no_emo_in_third September 23 2009, 18:52:58 UTC
Thank you... And yes, I do.

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makesyoucoffee September 23 2009, 19:57:49 UTC
That's a good hobby. D-do you keep all your writings together?

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no_emo_in_third September 23 2009, 20:14:38 UTC
I do... I have a small journal of my poems.

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come2niichan September 23 2009, 18:48:43 UTC
Ooh, a haiku!! So lovely~

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no_emo_in_third September 23 2009, 18:53:29 UTC
Thank you! Are you fond of poetry?

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come2niichan September 23 2009, 19:00:07 UTC
Yes, very, of course!

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no_emo_in_third September 23 2009, 20:15:30 UTC
I'm glad to meet someone else who likes it!

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owatta September 23 2009, 20:05:57 UTC
A-ah, K-kira, t-this is so pretty...

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no_emo_in_third September 23 2009, 20:15:58 UTC
Thank you... That's kind of you to say.

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owatta September 23 2009, 20:38:44 UTC
B-but it is pretty..!! I-I'm sorry, don't you like it?

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no_emo_in_third September 23 2009, 21:38:34 UTC
I'm not sure... I don't think it's good enough for the person that I wrote it for.

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heartofstone22 September 23 2009, 20:36:31 UTC
Oh! Haiku. A good friend of mine loved to recite poetry, but none of his were ever this beautiful. You should do more.

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no_emo_in_third September 23 2009, 21:38:51 UTC
That's really kind of you to say... And I'll try to write some more.

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bubblyreaper September 23 2009, 21:16:54 UTC
What are you talking about? It's a great start~!

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no_emo_in_third September 23 2009, 21:39:23 UTC
Thank you... I think that I'm just being too harsh with myself. Everyone else seems to like it.

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bubblyreaper September 23 2009, 22:31:50 UTC
Well, you know what they say; "We are our harshest critics".

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no_emo_in_third September 24 2009, 21:08:46 UTC
That's certainly true.

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