just a little aftermath of seeing pride and prejudice. :)

Nov 26, 2005 01:26

when there is a man who's desire to love me is greater than his persuit to be loved, there will be a man who's hand is worth taking. is risk and uncertainty too much to ask in love? must we wear a sign proclaiming our desperation in order to make certain his security? i find myself dreaming of a man, but at first sign's indifferent glance, ( Read more... )

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Hope you don't mind me listening in anonymous November 26 2005, 16:25:25 UTC
But this is amazing. Did you write this? Let me know -

"and to teach young boys that becoming a man is in means of stature and not character"

In a nutshell you just captured something that burns in me - so many of the problems and baggage I've encountered with students and adults are the result of a man who was a man in name only, a "man" who merely hurt and destroyed, selfishly, rather than doing what a man is supposed to do: build up, protect, defend, and love selflessly.

If you get a chance to respond, let me know if you wrote this - I find it amazing.

And, all guys - read this! This girl is wise.

thanks (again, hope you don't mind me commenting)

mr. bill

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Re: Hope you don't mind me listening in no_greater_love November 26 2005, 19:45:52 UTC
man, thanks so much. i did write this! haha, sometimes i just burst and "stuff" comes out! your words are always so encouraging. :) thanks again!
-summer-

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Re: Hope you don't mind me listening in anonymous November 26 2005, 21:34:52 UTC
Well, I hope you know that I'm not just saying it to be flattering. :-) You are a really good writer. I like reading your bursts of inspiration.

And - yeah - all guys need to read this!

m.b.

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staceynofacey November 26 2005, 19:04:00 UTC
spoken from the true heart of a woman.
summer, u never cease to amaze me or put into writing what every girl knows in her heart!

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lovethelogos November 26 2005, 21:55:52 UTC
you should construct this into a poetry slam, those are amazing. You could totally own up the competition.

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i am amazed concialdinosaur November 27 2005, 05:51:26 UTC
hey. it's taylor concialdi. you probably don't know me.
i go to your church.. and i'm pretty sure i go to your school. [that sounds kinda stalker-ish.. doesn't it] and i was at the girls retreat.. it was my birthday if it helps clarify.

but i just wanted to say that that post was beautiful. amazing. so many words can describe it, but none are coming to mind because.. it was great. beautiful.

--taylor

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Re: i am amazed no_greater_love November 27 2005, 19:20:09 UTC
hay girl! thanks for the compliment!
you should go see pride and prejudice! it's amazingggggggg
-summer-
ps
and don't you ever settle.;)

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scottiecarp November 28 2005, 03:56:53 UTC
well, seeing as i check livejournal about once a week, i relegate myself to what looks like im echoing everyone else's thoughts, but when i say that you're an amazing writer summer, it's truly sincere. i love reading what you put in your journal, and it never ceases to inspire and encourage me. thanks for being such a neat girl! and i loved pride and prejudice! and i hope that i can be one of those guys you dream of, not for you, but for the girl God has set apart for me. (not that i believe in a soul mate. just when the time comes. :] )

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