10_orders 01 Smile for me

Jul 09, 2010 22:29

Title: Safety and Risks
Pairing/Characters: First Aid and Red Alert, with guest appearance from Fireflight, mentions of Ratchet, Inferno, Optimus Prime, and Smokescreen
Prompt: 01. Smile for me
Rating: K+
Warnings: Unbeta'd, meandering limited third person pov
Summary: Red Alert has many issues that he thinks about, even as a well meaning and ( Read more... )

first aid, red alert, *10_orders, *fandom: g1

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playswithworms July 11 2010, 04:06:23 UTC
Aw, poor Red - I can see how it would be hard to trust if he saw everyone's dirty little secrets all the time.

Though the guilt of doing so was there as he knew from watching their leader Optimus was wont to blame himself for everything, even if it was Red Alert’s fault for being a coward to run from someone who saw him for him. *nods* and that can be scary, too, being seen for yourself.

I like how you describe First Aid's smile without it being actually seen (that's always a conundrum for me ^^)

And don't worry, Red, Aid's probably about the safest fellow out there to smile at ;D

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no_pen_writer July 11 2010, 15:58:40 UTC
*nods* and that can be scary, too, being seen for yourself. It is such a scary thing especially for someone like Red.

I like how you describe First Aid's smile without it being actually seen (that's always a conundrum for me ^^) fdfaff Thanks when I saw that prompt on my table I just had this open mouth gape going on when trying to figure out how to do it. I'm happy my cop out worked out though.

And don't worry, Red, Aid's probably about the safest fellow out there to smile at ;D Oh yes Aid is, you just have to watch out for the overprotective copterbot is all. >.>...<.

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