A Beginning

Apr 12, 2007 15:11

It was night, and my four- door sat purring in its state, awaiting for a flash of envy to return to its rolling march. I was lost in thought, my mind wandering off in the distance, far from the corporeal and ethereal. The other metallic beasts around me lurched forward, accelerating through the intersection and off towards a hasty arrival. We, my ( Read more... )

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arcanum_firefly April 15 2007, 03:04:33 UTC
insightful and interesting

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daynadesastre April 18 2007, 20:19:41 UTC
i totally told you about purple prose.
and you're totally reading over my shoulder.
or next to. rawr.

i still can't spell.

uhm yea.

better? i commented, eh?

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daynadesastre April 19 2007, 02:10:09 UTC
ps: sorry for deleting your next post..

i feel really bad too- it was really coming along well!

i'm a bad person. :(

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despertarse April 22 2007, 16:40:01 UTC
Urgh. Purple prose. I remember learning what that phrase meant in sixth grade and thinking, "Oh no, am I purple prose writer?"

In other news:
Hey, Noah darling!

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