Comments | noclueontheloo: fic: Homecoming (Sophie / Sian)

noclueontheloo

fic: Homecoming (Sophie / Sian)

Aug 29, 2010 15:19

Title: Homecoming
Author: noclueontheloo
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Coronation Street, Sophie/Sian
Word Count: 3885
Summary: And they’ve pulled me in so tight that I can feel Sian’s fingers just slipping out of my hand and there’s nothing I can do about it but just stand there and let them all squeeze the life out of me.

( Homecoming... )

fic: corrie, coronation street, sophie and sian

Comments 20

2justsmile2 August 29 2010, 16:55:22 UTC

This was so good had me on edge the entire time, i'm still wondering what happened wiv those pervy men.
This is probably the first and only fic thats actually making me want to just read the next part straight away and you havent even written it yet :D
Continue please :))

noclueontheloo August 29 2010, 19:17:01 UTC

I'm so pleased you were into it. I'm afraid there's no part two for this one, you'll just have to imagine what really went on. I kind of wanted to leave the details hazy and let readers fill in the gaps from what was written. I hope that's not too annoying!

2justsmile2 August 29 2010, 19:27:50 UTC

Oh, don't worry i actaully like the fact that your keeping it like that. It lets me us my imagination then, so i certainly don't find it annoying - especially since you've now officailly become my new favourite writer :D

2justsmile2 August 29 2010, 19:29:49 UTC

oops thats my comment up there by the way, it wasnt meant to be anonymous hehe :))

shaz_bananas August 29 2010, 17:49:29 UTC

Now that was great. Seriously. I try to avoid Sophie/Sian fics to be honest because I just don't really click with them, I love the girls but can't read the fics (how odd!) - but this fic has changed that. You had it really in character. Well done.

noclueontheloo August 29 2010, 19:18:32 UTC

Awesome! And I feel chuffed that you gave my fic a go, even though you don't usually like them. I hope I did their characters justice, it was fun to try it out from both their standpoints.

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noclueontheloo August 29 2010, 19:20:10 UTC

That's wicked, cheers. Sorry there is no update for this story, but I may have to write another one soon(ish). Guess I'll have to keep following Corrie for more inspiration.

sashadiamondz February 12 2011, 22:39:04 UTC

That was beautifully written, when I read this I felt all the emtions really fantastic writing xx