"Victory" - Ventress/Obi, Obi/Siri

Jun 30, 2009 20:03

Gonna go ahead and post this here as well, for redundancy's sake. XD

Title: "Victory"
Author: noctaval
Characters/Pairing: Ventress/Obi-Wan (unrequited); Obi/Siri (implied)
Notes:  A random little AU idea that popped into my head.  Set sometime during the Clone Wars. Dark.
Summary: Asajj Ventress lays a trap for the object of her obsession.

Victory )

obi-wan, fic, ventress, star wars

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ansketil_rose September 19 2009, 11:25:18 UTC
She sensed his confusion and hid her smile in the shadows of her lowered face

I loved this line, it's perfect Ventress! Also how you play around with what Kenobi is feeling without telling the reader, letting Asajj make her assumptions. Victory in death - Kenobi is delightfully vengeful here.

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noctaval September 19 2009, 16:28:38 UTC
Thank you!
Yes, I wanted to try and show everything from Ventress's point of view, even her misconceptions. And I'm kind of addicted to an Obi-Wan that's not so pure --- I have to hold myself back from wearing that idea out. X3

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