I stand in front of the pit Shall we call it a pit The other word is just too depressing
Standing there I wonder “Why did this happen” and “What did she do?”
Drop of liquid on my cheek Not sure if it is a rain drop Or it is a tear
Roses lay lightly on the box Shall we call it a box The other word is just too depressing
It was a cold crisp day The wind piercing my cheek Now I realize that I am in fact crying
All of a sudden the sun takes control of the clouds Then I realize That this is part of life
Just like the beginning, this is the end Shall we call it the end The other word is just too depressing
that's the only one that i really liked. but only because i don't like how every other one rhymes. i think you have cute poems though. and learn HOW TO SPELL YOU CUTE FACE TALENTED BOY YOU
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very talented
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By: Ryan Hake
I stand in front of the pit
Shall we call it a pit
The other word is just too depressing
Standing there I wonder
“Why did this happen” and
“What did she do?”
Drop of liquid on my cheek
Not sure if it is a rain drop
Or it is a tear
Roses lay lightly on the box
Shall we call it a box
The other word is just too depressing
It was a cold crisp day
The wind piercing my cheek
Now I realize that I am in fact crying
All of a sudden the sun takes control of the clouds
Then I realize
That this is part of life
Just like the beginning, this is the end
Shall we call it the end
The other word is just too depressing
that's the only one that i really liked.
but only because i don't like how every other one rhymes.
i think you have cute poems though.
and learn HOW TO SPELL YOU CUTE FACE TALENTED BOY YOU
you make me sooo proud
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-Kate
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did u just like make those up?
I Wonder
Sometimes I wonder
What it would be like if you were still here
If I could see your smiling face
If you were still near
Sometimes I wonder
If I could still see you smile and here your laugh
I know I will see you again some day
But I still wish you could come back
Sometimes I wonder
If I stopped crying all day long
That I could just maybe
Still here your beautiful song
Sometimes I wonder
If I could sleep in the night
That I would have dreams of you
Dancing in the bright light
But these are just words
Some say words of art
But I don’t think that’s true
I think they are words from the heart
that reminds me of Jamie but in a good way dont worrie
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Those poems were soo incredible.
You are soo talented Ryan.
Hopefully I'll see you this summer. I know that my mom said that she was going to take us out on your dad's boat soon.
Well see you 'round.
love, Samanthaaaa
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