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nohopefortrevor

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Feb 10, 2004 17:37

this is a song i wrote during my rock music class i think it turned out really well ( Read more... )

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whatwouldjavido February 10 2004, 23:36:14 UTC

Lol, "El Mar"?

Re: holyzombiejesus February 11 2004, 01:48:05 UTC

hahaha

Re: nohopefortrevor February 11 2004, 02:26:48 UTC

HEy fuck you nothing rhymed with ocean

Re: dazzle_163 February 11 2004, 02:34:22 UTC

lol well i like it. although that doesnt matter javi BFF

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your_worse_ex February 11 2004, 03:51:43 UTC

If you had less grammatical errors, it could work.

Re: nohopefortrevor February 11 2004, 04:01:25 UTC

fuck grammar

chilenocl February 12 2004, 08:20:33 UTC

u guys all need to shut the fuck up
trevor, lyrics looking better...
don't worry about grammar, it's art, it's music, and u don't have to rhyme either.
keep on working,
nick

ps: by the way, i never saw el mar, did u take that off or soething?

Re: nohopefortrevor February 12 2004, 17:01:07 UTC

thanks bro that means a lot....Ya i did a little re-write but i think they both sound good...