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nohopefortrevor

To: You From: Me

Feb 17, 2004 16:10

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dazzle_163 February 17 2004, 22:37:50 UTC

is ur sis getting married?

nohopefortrevor February 17 2004, 23:13:50 UTC

ya this saturday

Re: dazzle_163 February 18 2004, 00:57:13 UTC

thats so great. im really happy for her

holyzombiejesus February 18 2004, 13:44:46 UTC

i notice you write alot, and format wise it's all the same. its 4 lines wih 4-5 words a line... try writing in a paragraph and put rhymes in different places. when you then put the lyrics into the music you write you have alot more room for creativity in how you say/sing the words.

take it easy.

Re: whatwouldjavido February 18 2004, 15:06:27 UTC

That's true. HE's held back by structure

Re: nohopefortrevor February 18 2004, 16:53:34 UTC

Phil and javi should start a band...and it would be the greatest band of all time.

Re: whatwouldjavido February 18 2004, 20:35:33 UTC

Finally you've said something that makes sense.

"El Mar"

-Aladdin

nohopefortrevor February 18 2004, 16:43:17 UTC

not a bad idea i'll try it on my next song