A Missed Opportunity (Part 3/3)

Sep 18, 2012 22:10

Pairing: Jack/Liz
Spoilers: Takes place after the season 6 finale
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Not mine. Everything belongs to Tina (as it should). I was really struggling with how to end this one - I hope the conclusion is satisfying!

For once in his life, he doesn’t know how to interpret a woman’s intentions. Usually, when a woman invites herself into ( Read more... )

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md123 September 18 2012, 20:26:25 UTC
Nice ending! Sorry I preempted it with a roughly similar plotline!

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noie84 September 20 2012, 15:22:16 UTC
Ha, no worries! Thanks for commenting. :)

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demilybones September 18 2012, 21:11:20 UTC
I squeed like mad at the part where she's tugging down the hem of his shirt. This is better than chocolate.

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purpleeater1 September 19 2012, 00:21:48 UTC
Seconded.

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noie84 September 20 2012, 15:24:43 UTC
Better than chocolate? That's high praise right there! Glad you enjoyed.

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jennryan1 September 19 2012, 02:00:55 UTC
I agree. Loved the ending. You did a good job. Can't wait to see what else you have on the burner for the next story. wink wink nudge nudge! :)

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noie84 September 20 2012, 15:26:55 UTC
Aw, thanks! I have a bunch of unfinished stuff on my hard drive that I'll get to after I'm done with essays for school.

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