Parts IV and V

[noir_au_blanc]

There is to much on my mind, which is why Im turning to the written word in hopes that it will calm the raging thoughts .. having not written in a while it feels a tad rusty, the words feel forced and abit uneven, but it is what it is, and that is where I would leave it. As always, the prompts come from that great community 31_days.

Title: Hum and Sway

Comments

[i_llbedammned]

The first description sounds almost scientific.

The second description feels like her world on the dream side is real. It's a bit like that saying about the Japanese professor, "I know not whether I am a butterfly who dreams he is a man or a man who dreams he is a butterfly."

[noir_au_blanc]

The second description is rather gorgeous, Ive never heard the saying about the Japanese professor, I must remember this :)