Never Be Free Chapter Five

Apr 25, 2009 12:26

 Title: Never Be Free
Author: Noirreigne
Pairing: Blair/Chuck & Blair/OC
Rating: R for language and smut.
Spoilers: Through 2x17
Summary: Except you enthrall me, never shall be free. Future Fic.

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choco_dreamer May 9 2009, 14:21:49 UTC
wow, i love the way you write chuck and blair! i hadn't come across this fic before but after reading this chapter i went back and read the rest - and now i'm addicted :) i'm rele intriguied to know what it is that blair is hiding - clearly she still has very strong feelings [at least physical ones :P] towards chuck. and eeeee jealous!chuck is SO HOT >< i cant wait for the next chappie!

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noirreigne May 9 2009, 14:41:23 UTC
Thanks for the lovely review. I agree jealous Chuck is HOT!

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lunar47 May 9 2009, 14:28:50 UTC
i'm seriously loving this story

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noirreigne May 9 2009, 16:26:41 UTC
Thank you so much for the lovely comment. :D

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potential_zeppo May 9 2009, 15:32:40 UTC
This story is so friggin intense. Seriously, that's the best way to describe it. I can't help but feel so bad for Blair, Chuck is really putting her into a miserable situation. But of course their chemistry is so electric that I can't help but read on!

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noirreigne May 11 2009, 18:26:36 UTC
I hope I don't scare you away with the intensity. It just came out that way. I guess I just feel that Chuck would be in a much darker place having realized all the years he lost due to him being stuck after Bart's death. This was written during the hiatus when he was being kind of an ass to Blair. Maybe I made his a bit too intense.

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potential_zeppo May 11 2009, 19:45:13 UTC
No, its perfect I swear! Haha, I heart CB angst :D

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noirreigne May 11 2009, 19:54:59 UTC
Good because there is more to come. :D

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cynicalshadows May 9 2009, 17:20:24 UTC
Oh wow! God Blair is in the worst situation. She's stuck in a marriage with her husband dying whom she does love I think, but she's still in love with Chuck, and he is not going to give up ever. Poor girl! This was just fantastic. I cannot wait for more. You totally have captured the intensity between Chuck and Blair! *squee*

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noirreigne May 11 2009, 18:43:04 UTC
Thank you so much for commenting. After I wrote this I thought I might have gone a little overboard with the intensity. I might go back and edit it later because it does show Chuck a bit more obsessive then I planned.

I owe you some reviews. I am setting a chunk of time aside tomorrow when I have a break to finally read your epic. It looks like it is heading into Gone With The Wind Territory with all the chapters. I am really looking forward to having something good to read.

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distant_dance May 9 2009, 19:58:23 UTC
the way you write chuck&blair is amazing and really in character. you have a beautiful way of writing, and im interested in reading the next chapter.

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noirreigne May 11 2009, 18:43:54 UTC
Thank you so much for commenting and all the lovely comments. I really appreciate it. :D

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