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Oct 16, 2006 15:11

French Heroes of Hundred Years’ War ( Read more... )

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angelw_outwings October 20 2006, 18:26:13 UTC
No comma between perfect and but--no change in subject.

Yes commas around in fact, though it's debatable. In this case, I prefer it without, but that may be wrong.

And while I'm on the grammar kick, I would make the semicolon after Joan of Arc a period. Yes, I started the previous sentence with a conjunction, which likely negates all I've said. :)

Looks like you're going to have an interesting research paper!!

Are you and Tony coming for Northwestern? I'm keeping my ears open for people wanting to buy your Auburn tickets.

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