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luzula March 8 2008, 14:45:37 UTC
Oh, boys. Not so good with the communication... I love this line, it's such a vivid image:

Ray interrupts, his arms everywhere at once, like an over-caffeinated Shiva.

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brigantine March 9 2008, 02:51:31 UTC
Hee. Thanks! I'm rather fond of that bit, myself.

And of course Shiva's a good dancer, too... *snortle*

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chikan4 March 8 2008, 16:02:36 UTC
Ray interrupts, his arms everywhere at once, like an over-caffeinated Shiva.

Slow clap.

Best.
Description.
Of Ray.
Ever.

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brigantine March 9 2008, 02:59:28 UTC
Heh. Thank you kindly! *buffs fingernails happily on shirt front*

That image does make me grin when I think about it. :)

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j_s_cavalcante March 8 2008, 16:12:46 UTC
Ohmygod, this is exquisite. Hilarious. I can't quote all the lines I loved because I'd quote the whole darn thing. I'll see if I can pull some out later. The Shiva line that luzula mentioned, though, is certainly one of the most memorable! Perfectly freaky scenario, great characterizations. I can see the whole scenario so clearly. \o/

Just, wow. I'm very impressed.

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brigantine March 9 2008, 03:09:04 UTC
Yayz! Thank you so much!

This didn't start out auspiciously at all - it started out as a drama, stalled horribly, and then one day Dief came up with the flowers idea, and we were off. Thank heaven for the wolf, eh? ;)

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viciouscats March 8 2008, 16:29:38 UTC
This is SO ADORABLE! :)

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brigantine March 9 2008, 03:11:57 UTC
Thank you! *does little happy-dance*

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simplystars March 8 2008, 18:10:32 UTC
Ooooooooooooooh Brig, I have just laughed myself into the worst. stomach ache. ever. BWAH!

So many deliciously quotable lines, and just picturing Ray's angry hair and the light bulb going on over wooing and the Power of Ray's Hands [oh Fraser, we know it too ♥] - well. This is a fantastically beautiful thing. *hugs it until Nos arrives*

as Diefenbaker so pointedly put it earlier this evening, perhaps it is past time for Fraser to pull his head out of his arse and quit faffing about

Dief deserves a cookie too!

"Fraser, endangering our lives in freakish ways does not communicate to me, 'Ray, my very good friend and partner, I want to be your love-muffin.'"

Oh, Ray. Of course it does! :D

You're a marvel, Brig. ♥

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brigantine March 9 2008, 03:20:39 UTC
I have just laughed myself into the worst. stomach ache. ever.

Wahahaaa! My evil plan has succeeded!

Dief totally deserves a cookie! The boys have thoroughly tested his patience, poor fellow. ;)

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