fic: Physicality - PG-13 [Ronon/Amelia, John/Teyla, Rodney/Jennifer]

Jan 21, 2010 19:38

TITLE: Physicality
AUTHOR: Tielan
SUMMARY: Desire is about many things.
RATING: PG-13
CATEGORY: romance, fluff
DISCLAIMER: Stargate Atlantis characters belong to MGM, Sci-Fi, Gekko, and a lot of companies that make money out of them. I'd love to be making money out of them, but I'll settle for borrowing them for fanfiction.
NOTES: Three ficlets - ( Read more... )

ronon/amelia, mckay/keller, john/teyla

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Comments 19

amenirdis January 21 2010, 12:56:02 UTC
Oh the adorable! It's fun, it's pretty, it's fluffy, and underneath you've got an edge -- our expectations, our ideals of beauty, and what true beauty is. Everyone is beautiful to those who love them.

I like your Ronon particularly, so vivid and real, and John's worshipful kiss. Just beautiful!

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tielan January 22 2010, 11:38:10 UTC
They've all got...edges. Ones that they don't notice, which are filed down, but which catch every now and then.

I wanted to put all the characters - the guys in particular - in a new spaces. Ronon being quite still and trusting, John content and tender, Rodney playful and wondering rather than knowing.

So glad you liked it!

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vipersweb January 21 2010, 16:43:55 UTC
I love the playfulness in all of these as well as the body images you describe. Nicely done. This is fun and sexy and sweet, all at the same time and good illustrations of the various relationships that have developed.

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tielan January 22 2010, 11:38:42 UTC
Thank you! I was hoping to achieve the 'quiet moments' between all the characters.

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2bluaeryn January 21 2010, 20:10:39 UTC
Love these all,but esp John/Teyla.

Having gone though the Mommy thing not once but thrice it is true that all the exercise in the world never quit rids that 'baby belly'.

As always, well done.

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tielan January 22 2010, 11:39:56 UTC
Well, some women manage it; however, I understand that most of us don't. And, as a male friend put it, "I love my wife and therefore she is sexy, whatever she looks like."

Which I thought was very cute. :)

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2bluaeryn January 22 2010, 15:01:49 UTC
Very good man. He would be a keeper.

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astridv January 22 2010, 00:33:23 UTC
I love it, especially the last part with Jennifer and Rodney. Felt down-to-earth and sweet at the same time.

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tielan January 22 2010, 11:41:25 UTC
Thank you! I haven't read much Rodney/Jennifer fic, but I was hoping to depict a bit of lightheartedness between them, and yet also the seriousness of the relationship for them.

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ninja007 January 22 2010, 07:05:39 UTC
I loved it.

All the ficlets spoke of deep love and intimacy.

My fav is the one you probably would guess...John/Teyla.

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tielan January 22 2010, 11:55:52 UTC
Hee. Not exactly a surprise. But I'm glad I got the relationships right!

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