Comments | non_plot: #118 : PG, Re-Grounding

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#118 : PG, Re-Grounding

Jun 28, 2006 19:57

Title: Re-Grounding
Author: terredancer
Subject: The Graduates; Max, Bastian (with occasional mentions of Birgit)
Rating: PG
Challenge: #118 - Foreign (over time-limit, and slightly over word-limit as well)
Notes: Sadly, I've never been abroad, so some of the descriptions are vague, but the characters spent a few months wandering cheerfully through foreign ( Read more... )

Comments 4

heatherlayne_n June 29 2006, 05:48:35 UTC

Aww, lovely. I don't know any of the background of these characters, really, but I knew immediately just how Max feels about Bastian from that little exchange. Now I want to know more about the backpacking trip!

terredancer July 4 2006, 05:03:06 UTC

Both the background of these characters and the backpacking trip are complicated beyond all belief. Probably more details about the backpacking trip will come out soon.

I'm just glad that Max came through as transparent on the subject as he always is in my head. :)

phinnia July 3 2006, 20:36:23 UTC

Bastian (who I don't think I've met before) seems beautifully foreign and mysterious and ... rich, in my head ... just on his own, regardless of the setting. :-D I love the narrative structure here - it floats around in a mirror of Max's thoughts without being too hard to follow. Nicely done.

terredancer July 4 2006, 05:04:22 UTC

I haven't introduced him before? I should. He truly is a character and a half. He's not as foreign as he acts, he is a bit mysterious even at the best of times, and... yeah. :)

Thank you :)