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nongttaengi

Girlfriend 2

Mar 29, 2008 21:44

Warm lips pressed against Heechul’s neck, sucking softly on the skin until it turned red, longer until it was purple, and an obvious mark was left in place of the lips. Breath was hot on his ear as teeth bit gently on his earlobe, tongue trailing up the outer edge of his ear before words were whispered quietly. “Get home quick, Heechul ( Read more... )

fandom: super junior, rating: nc-17, character: kibum, character: heechul

Comments 20

amadomaybe March 30 2008, 05:45:27 UTC

Ohhhhh my. That was... hotandsexy. And yummy. And... I feel dirty reading it. XD But a good kind of dirty.

I don't know if I commented on the first one, but I loved it just as much. And I really think you should go for a trilogy. The best things come in threes, yes? (Also I just really want you to write amazing smut with Yehsung.)

amadomaybe March 30 2008, 05:45:54 UTC

XD first~ *easily amused*

nongttaengi March 30 2008, 06:19:07 UTC

8D OMG. I'm glad you liked it. I was worried it wouldn't be as hot as part one. Haha. So it took me quite a while to write. Hm...there will actually be a part three, but I don't think it's going to be rated this high. lol. It's more going to show how Yesung and Kibum's relationship started and died. *sigh*

Anyway, thanks for reading 8D ilu!

yoochuns_lover March 30 2008, 05:48:24 UTC

aofoeamiofraieofrikedaijraoefrro <= attempt at commenting with a melted brain*

OMFG!!!! THAT WAS SEXY!!!

wonder how yesung is going to like that phone call?

great job with pt 2

nongttaengi March 30 2008, 06:19:59 UTC

Melted brain replies are ♥

I'm glad you liked it 8D You can bet Yesung wasn't very fond of that phone call. Oh noes, he wasn't! kekekeke!

Thanks so much! ♥

yoochuns_lover March 30 2008, 06:26:57 UTC

Oh i know he wasn't but he can't be too mad since he does it to kibum.....lol

Ur welcome!!!!

<3<3

blessedangel13 March 30 2008, 14:45:24 UTC

X_X

nongttaengi March 30 2008, 17:47:37 UTC

...8D Thanks?

blessedangel13 March 31 2008, 05:34:02 UTC

<33333333

that's all I can coherently say

nongttaengi March 31 2008, 05:44:32 UTC

XD thanks. Happy to melt your brain. ♥

BTW. I love your icon 8D I love that picture of Kibummie. Mmm...I knew he was one of my favorites for a reason...*dies*

dunke_engel March 30 2008, 20:00:01 UTC

it was so sexy, hot and everything *______________*

jxlove April 1 2008, 00:46:15 UTC

<333 Sorry it took me a while to get the chance to read your porn xD. It was HOT and Kinky! Gahh Kibum is freaky hehe, I love it<333

Lizzimakesthebestsmutpornsexever!

<3lyn