Death Rides A Horse With One Eye

[noni_awesome]

Here is another story for your reading pleasure(?)

Comments

[roytheboy]

I really enjoyed it! I could almost hear the elderly man talking to me from his chair or bed or wherever. His voice was very strong throughout and that is a very good aspect of the whole story. I also like the two characters. I could really feel them as well throughout. It was a good story. I had some difficulty understanding exactly what happened when he was creeping by, but after I re-read it I got it. And at that point I was too invested in the story to bother me much. Good job Mark!

[noni_awesome]

thanks again. see you later today. better be here by three!