Dream voice

[miir]

What she does not hear:

Only now. Now, with your eyes closed and your ears deaf to the sound of my voice. Now I can speak, now I can live: I love you. I love you.

Watching you thus I tremble as if kneeling before an altar. And I burn, the sacrifice on that altar, with all the intensity of my passion and all the desperation of these unheard pleas.

Comments

[anonymous]

beautiful piece. just beautiful. I've read this before but it still strikes me with awe. it really captures how one could love uncondtionally and wholey.

me, aka The Girl Who Crushes Hearts Beneath Booted Heel Without Batting An Eyelash

true. but hmm..

Because She and Love Don't Get Along

this i'm not sure of.

[kudoskudoskudos]

that was me btw.. stupid login -_-

[miir]

HAHAHAHA.

*points, laughs, mocks*

wholly*, by the way.

:D

[anonymous]

ok whatever.. lol.. mind does not think now.

[anonymous]

Let's talk about looooove

ahh yes... love can do so much.

People sometimes overlook, hide, or reject love. If they could do that, then I believe it isn't really love that they have. Love is too strong to be kept. It has to be shared. It is a relational emotion/feeling/binding/link. One cannot expect to be loved and not love at the same time (although sometimes this does happen).

Like what you said in your work, love is an intense feeling. It becomes a source of life. And by this I mean a new kind of life. A life that's richer and just... more. yes, no error there - just "more". You start to see things differently and suddenly the world starts to illuminate in full color. Things start to become beautiful again. And you realize everything you've been missing.

I really hope you find love. And when you do, write something like this again, and i'm pretty sure it'd be even greater than this already is.

<3

[kudoskudoskudos]

and ok.. wtf.. that was me again. -_- stupid log-innnn

[miir]

But what ifffffff life is already beautiful? Eh di you don't need love?

Pero thanks! May nakuha akong image na pwede kong isama sa sinusulat ko. Wooh.

P.S. Ang noob mo talaga maglogin.

[kudoskudoskudos]

But what ifffffff life is already beautiful? Eh di you don't need love?

no naman. if life is already beautiful then it'd be even more beautiful with love.

[yasashiikaze]

isa lang ang alam ko sa love...

love is not love without will and effort...

[miir]

Akala ko will and grace...

Teehee.

[miir]

P.S. Walang comment about the piece? ;_;

[yasashiikaze]

hmm, took me quite a while. sensya na, it's becoming hard to find some time.

nways, i just found it weird at first. i had the feeling these weren't the type of words that would come out of a guy/girl. you actually got me confused.

kasi nga written from a guy's point of view, pero yung words and imagination and creativity is obviously from a girl.

pero in general, okie naman. :D the images are vibrant and stick to the imagination. in short, really romantic.

i hope though, someday she would hear, and that she would know... *wink*