LJI friends & rivals: topic 9

[noodledays]

Sarah wasn't prone to speculating about or staring at random people, but something about the older gentleman seated on the bench at the edge of Riverview Park caught her eye. She was stuck waiting at the interminable, recalcitrant traffic light on the corner of Sixth and Willow Lane when she glanced over and found her gaze staying on him

Comments

[alycewilson]

I like how his kindness and peacefulness shines through in his eyes.

[sinnamongirl]

Very sweet and fun to read!

[murielle]

Ah, this is sheer joy!

Of course you had me with the dog. My next door neighbour has a dog named Lucy.

I loved that Sarah went over to help when she suspected something was wrong.

I much prefer your ending to the ending of the proverb. :-)

[whipchick]

So curious to see what happens next!

[dee_aar2]

I love it when people churn out feel good stories. It makes the world a happier place and reminds us it could be. Part 2 should come soon ... I would really like to know what goes forward ...