LJI friends & rivals: topic 10

[noodledays]

As Mike navigated their van along the curvy road, Laurie did what she could to keep Ivy and Theo occupied so they wouldn't a) drive him batty with questions about arrival times and pit stops, or b) pick at each other to the point where one or the other ended up in tears or screams

Comments

[hikerpoet]

It's really strong overall and I don't see any errors so no need. You know me--I love anything nature related!

[tonithegreat]

Aw! This is very sweet and quite an enjoyable read.

[eternal_ot]

Awww <3 this was sweet and made me smile. A nice read :) cute!

[halfshellvenus]

Some people never realize that the true answer, even if not the seemingly desired answer, is better than a manipulative lie.

You know, unless the man in the moon looks kind of like a half-rotten ghost of Ziggy, I can't see him either!

[rayaso]

Such a sweet, enjoyable story! You did an excellent job.