Fabulous!!!!!! *counts how many exclamation marks I just mashed* Ehh, probably not enough, but whatever.
This was so funny though. I don't care if you say it was self-indulgent or not. Hey, isn't that the definition of fanfiction anyways? lol Everything was great. From the bad decisions, and jumping in other peoples pools (to Jongdae naked and jealous fiddle-sticks-spouting Junmyeon). Although, really the business card at a bathroom line? Chanyeol? Seriously? How brilliant of you! I got some severe feels when Baekhyun nearly ruined things between them. The silent brush offs, and then the disastrous Saturday almost-make-out session. My heart went a little fluttery for a bit. Chanyeol has the best paybacks though. "How does right now work for you?" The little shit. He's perfect.
Thank you for writing this. I was going to take a nap, but then I decided this might be a better use of my time, and it was! Oh so much better! :D
i can super relate with Chanyeol's "I thought, even if you were just using me I might be able to win you over." and that "coupon" by Baekhyun is really cute. that KaiSoo tho~ even by descriptions alone i have already pictured kyungsoo as that stoic character hahaha (thanks for reminding me about his smile -- that really bright smile). thank you for this fic. im hoping for some sort of sequel, tho xD
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This was great. So great. But it is also 3am so I don't know what im typing anymore. But it was great.
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thank you so much! //blushes//
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*counts how many exclamation marks I just mashed* Ehh, probably not enough, but whatever.
This was so funny though. I don't care if you say it was self-indulgent or not. Hey, isn't that the definition of fanfiction anyways? lol
Everything was great. From the bad decisions, and jumping in other peoples pools (to Jongdae naked and jealous fiddle-sticks-spouting Junmyeon). Although, really the business card at a bathroom line? Chanyeol? Seriously? How brilliant of you! I got some severe feels when Baekhyun nearly ruined things between them. The silent brush offs, and then the disastrous Saturday almost-make-out session. My heart went a little fluttery for a bit. Chanyeol has the best paybacks though. "How does right now work for you?" The little shit. He's perfect.
Thank you for writing this. I was going to take a nap, but then I decided this might be a better use of my time, and it was! Oh so much better! :D
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thank you for putting my fic above nap time. that was a real sacrifice (no sarcasm).
And thank you for reading and leaving such a lovely comment! ^^
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Thank you for reading! I'm glad you liked the characters (and who doesn't love kyungsoo's sunshine smile??)
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