[Drabble] Of Balconies and Moves

Sep 20, 2015 22:27

Title: Of Balconies and Moves
Pairing: Baekhyun/Chanyeol
Rating: PG
Length: 2.5 k
Genre: stream-of-conciousness rambling poorly disguised as romance.
Summary: It’s a beautiful night. Baekhyun is equally striking. All Chanyeol has to do is make the damn move. (Inspired by the situation in Kevin Barry’s Across the Rooftops).

It's nearing four in the morning... )

pairing: baekyeol, !fanfic

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clio323 September 20 2015, 15:56:15 UTC
this is so so s o o o o o o cute I CANT LIVE

chanyeol is the most adorable clueless and painfully awkward human being ever and i love it so much. baekhyun is seriously suave and all the imagery was just so lovely and perfect and i could see everything in my mind's eye (except the cats bc why) and just

THANK YOU for such a great story and wonderful way to start my morning :)

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noonaofdarkness September 21 2015, 04:16:56 UTC
awww thank you.

chanyeol really is a huge idiot. he was almost painful to write. but luckily, there's baekhyun to make things easier for him (if he could just stop hyperventilating).

thanks for reading and leaving such a nice little comment. ^^

ps - the alley below my apartment is home to many a cat orgy y, imagine how i feel.

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aureuss September 20 2015, 16:59:44 UTC
OMGGGGGGGG

i was smiling and squealing throughout this fic. this is too cute and adorable and i literally groaned at yeol's dumb!!! i have always loved your style of writing esp on how you provide readers a clear pic of what's going on, really concise and natural ;A; THIS IS GREAT how to even emphasize

"...the aggressive meows of what is most likely two cats fucking in the alley. Ah, at least romance isn’t dead." LOL MOI DIED

LOVED THE WHOLE 'ARE YOU MAKING YOUR MOVE' SCENE REALLY FRUSTRATING GOD YEOL IS AWK AF

AND THEN THEY SHARED SPIT TIL DAWN UGH LOVED IT ;A;

/rolls off with feels/

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noonaofdarkness September 21 2015, 04:20:30 UTC
ahhh, your comment made me roll off with feels. this little story really isn't worthy of such nice words, but i'm super happy you enjoyed it. and that it felt natural to read and follow.

chanyeol is an idiot, but we're all rooting for him anyway. even baekhyun.

thanks again for such a nice comment. it really made my morning when i read it ^^

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read0write September 21 2015, 00:03:17 UTC
aww too cute :)

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noonaofdarkness September 21 2015, 04:20:42 UTC
:D thank you for readinggggg

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charliebnim September 21 2015, 00:49:54 UTC

this was cute as hell :**: of course baekhyun

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noonaofdarkness September 21 2015, 04:21:44 UTC
baekhyun is wonderful. that is all.

thank you for reading and commenting!

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fullmetaloid September 21 2015, 18:34:56 UTC
ahhh what is this; it's so cute??? and at first, ngl, i totally thought baek had this whole grungy loner vibe bUT NOPE HE'S JUST AS CUTE AS CHANYEOL just a lot less awkward about it.

always such a pleasure to read your works (night stands was a huge favorite of mine)! <3

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noonaofdarkness September 22 2015, 04:37:00 UTC
baekhyun is totally just as much of a dork as chanyeol, he just has game. (he let chanyeol try though).

aww, thank you! //mwah//

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