Angel's Promise (Part 02-3/03)

[nooncha]

Author: Icha
Title: Angel’s Promise - Part 02-3
Pairing/Characters: Yunjae and Yoosumin
Rating: PG 
Form: Threeshots
Genre: Romance
Summary: "I'm an angel that will fulfill your dreams, Yunho." Answered the girl, yet again, smiling brightly.

A/N: It’s unbetaed, I’m sorry for my poor English *deep bowing*, but I hope it isn’t boring and you guys

Comments

[uchie07]

hi... sorry for commenting just now, because i actually read fics until it finish then making comment bout it.. but i already feel itchy to type something heheh...
I like ur plot, interesting but i think should adjust some description words...
if i'm not mistaken, i guess u're an indonesian. the word 'PLAK' is commonly substituted by 'SLAP' because that's Indonesian word of expression.. try to look up similar description words that commonly used in the dictionary :D... don't take it harsh okay, this is just some opinion for you ^_^...

[nooncha]

hehe~ sorry, I forgot to edit the description words >.<
will be edited soon ^______^
thanks for commenting~ :D
hope you enjoy the story

[uchie07]

it's okay just reminding u :D

[iscreamout]

Ko ff-nya jadi part kecil2 sih?
Karena LJ ya?

jadi jae beneran manusia, dy lagi sakit parah ya?
Ko bisa knal yun?
Jangan2 yun's secret admire ya?

[nooncha]

iya, LJnya kejem bener ;________;
padahal baru dikit, pas mau dipost ternyata 'file too large' T.T
*malah jadi curhat*

hehe~
tunggu di part selanjutnya yaa~
gumawo komennya :D