This was really, really something. The last paragraph made me gulp, and I can't wait for the next part of this. Seeing Ginny so unsure and naive is quite something, actually :) And Angelina... I guess I'd fall in love with her, too.
About the lj-cut, it took me forever to understand it too. I don't use the Rich-Text 'cause I really don't understand that lj-cut thing it has, so I just go with HTML, 'cause it's easier for me. If you're up to use the HTML it goes like this: < lj-cut="Follow the cut" > then you put the story right here in the middle of tags :D < /lj-cut > just without the spaces there :D
I hope I could help ;) And I hope you keep goiung with this story! Hah
Hey thanks for the comment! (yay..you like:))It's very very kind of you! I made you gulp! (*punching fist in air* hehe)
So I think I kind of understood how to do the lj cut on HTML, but the problem is that when I copy/paste the story on the HTML thing, then all the italics and any other formatting just *poofs*.. do i then need to sit and add all the etc.? lol don't want to do that! Man, I think I've ended up posting the same thing three times, AND coldn't get the link to look like a link on the forum..waah. oh well, newbie woes.
You did, yes. Damn hot fic you wrote there and all. :)
Oh, yeah, there's that. So, I always do it like that, 'cause my formatting goes poof too and I don't like Rich Text. Also, I think it's a good way to review everything I wrote, so if there's any remaining mistakes or something, I'll see.
When I posted mine, I did it two times! And then had to edit it 'cause I had put the link code wrong XD But, you know, I always search on google this stuff :D There's no way to be wrong if you search it on google!
Ahh yes..google our saviour! I shall head there.. :) Good to know that I'm not the only fumbling bumbling one! yay! glad you thought it was hot (can't tell you how happy that makes me!). I thought I had too much er..story telling/speeches and less well, hotness. Now I really want to rewrite the entire thing lol. Damn finals!
Hehe thanks..(yay!). I think you're right about Ginny.. she should have had more ..well, fizz to her..(thinking). I intended her to be uncertain with Angelina cuz it's her first time and everything..but that should be contrasted with a more vivacious/witty/kickass Ginny otherwise right?
Thanks though for saying it was well done :) (and hot..yay!) I think I stopped there because I have no idea how to write the actual er..steamy stuff. Never done it before..so am a bit nervous about that.
I know what you mean about the steamy stuff. I'm afraid I got the least bit drunk the first time I tried that. About the best I can do for advice there (not that you asked, ;) is to let the characters explore each other, use language that you are comfortable with, and try and fit yourself into the mind of one of them.
Under the circumstances of the story, I thought you did Ginny very well, and I enjoyed seeing a more uncertain side to her.
hehe that is Great idea.. I got drunkish irl for that lol, so might as well try it for this! But (ahem) well firstly, I really really appreciate advice! remember, budding new and everything here.. i didn't want to respond to you with a blatant 'Can you please please give me some ADVICE' but that is Exactly what I was trying to get :D. I shall try it.. and if you think of any other tips for me, i really would appreciate it. I feel like this writing is kind of different from the pen and paper variety, I was reading another fic and thinking how if it gets too long winded, it's not a bad thing on paper, but on the computer, you kind of want the 'tension' thing to not drop! Just feel it's a different genre you know? (and, thanks :))
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About the lj-cut, it took me forever to understand it too. I don't use the Rich-Text 'cause I really don't understand that lj-cut thing it has, so I just go with HTML, 'cause it's easier for me. If you're up to use the HTML it goes like this: < lj-cut="Follow the cut" > then you put the story right here in the middle of tags :D < /lj-cut > just without the spaces there :D
I hope I could help ;) And I hope you keep goiung with this story! Hah
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So I think I kind of understood how to do the lj cut on HTML, but the problem is that when I copy/paste the story on the HTML thing, then all the italics and any other formatting just *poofs*.. do i then need to sit and add all the etc.? lol don't want to do that!
Man, I think I've ended up posting the same thing three times, AND coldn't get the link to look like a link on the forum..waah. oh well, newbie woes.
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Oh, yeah, there's that. So, I always do it like that, 'cause my formatting goes poof too and I don't like Rich Text. Also, I think it's a good way to review everything I wrote, so if there's any remaining mistakes or something, I'll see.
When I posted mine, I did it two times! And then had to edit it 'cause I had put the link code wrong XD But, you know, I always search on google this stuff :D There's no way to be wrong if you search it on google!
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yay! glad you thought it was hot (can't tell you how happy that makes me!). I thought I had too much er..story telling/speeches and less well, hotness. Now I really want to rewrite the entire thing lol. Damn finals!
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Oh yeah, it's pretty darn hot too.
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Thanks though for saying it was well done :) (and hot..yay!) I think I stopped there because I have no idea how to write the actual er..steamy stuff. Never done it before..so am a bit nervous about that.
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Under the circumstances of the story, I thought you did Ginny very well, and I enjoyed seeing a more uncertain side to her.
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I shall try it.. and if you think of any other tips for me, i really would appreciate it. I feel like this writing is kind of different from the pen and paper variety, I was reading another fic and thinking how if it gets too long winded, it's not a bad thing on paper, but on the computer, you kind of want the 'tension' thing to not drop! Just feel it's a different genre you know?
(and, thanks :))
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