The Story of A Girl

Jun 29, 2009 14:45

There was a girl and there was this boy

She remembered everything about him

But wondered if he knew her at all

Every little thing he did for her

She buried it deep in her heart

Not knowing he would never be hers

This is my Story,

This is how it began

This is how it ended

Her feelings were never returned

She didn’t know this but it’s true
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yunxi_saki June 29 2009, 15:14:30 UTC
The picture seems to really suit the poem alot~!

It's quite a nice poem~ I got reminded of the time when I was also in love and was waiting for almost 2 years for him to love me back. But he rejected me when I told him I like though.. >.<

I agree that we tend to write some truth in the writtings that we produce~ Somehow, we just feel that writting based on how we felt, or events that really took place, makes the writting more real and can be related easily, right~

I hope to read more poems from you~ I seem to be able to relate easily to what you write~ ♪♪♪

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noopihime June 30 2009, 03:54:35 UTC
Thanks again for commenting.Honestly this poem is really about someone i liked a lot back when i was in primary school :D
But i wasn't brave enough to let him know i liked him.
Its nice to know there are people who are strong enough to let the other person know how they feel.

But am no longer like that.Just like you if i like someone i would tell that person being rejected or not is not something i can do anything about rite?

The picture was taken from a friend who i dont know where she got it from but i loved it and it felt as if she is feeling what i have written in the poem in that picture so......it suits it i suppose

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