I wrote this about two months ago for my language arts class...

[nope_seriously]

On the third day of January, a city was drowned in golden sunlight yet even the water that came from the fountains in school froze to crystal clear ice the second it spurted out. *Pat, pat, pat, pat.* A middle-aged business man's footstops on the ice was the only thing to be heard in the vacant lot as he parked his fancy sports car and scurried

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[timeisrunning]

Gina, You have a crap load of talent in writing, keep it up. I liked that story alot because it was in a short period of time but you but so much detail to make everything he did sound extrodanary. It was well put together and you have a huge vocabulary for a 7th grader hehehehe ;-).

Love Ya, Davey

[nope_seriously]

Hee, thanks Davey. It got me an A!

yeah

[timeisrunning]

yeah i liked it alot too but i think davey is a queer

[anonymous]

i agree with that too neeko

[nope_seriously]

Davey's not a queer, peroid.

[nope_seriously]

are you sure about that...with his tight shirt and everything.....

[nope_seriously]

Omg, that's so mean! Leave him alone, he's just emo, :X.

hahaha

[nope_seriously]

just cause hes emo does it mean he has to wear a tight shirt..it was cold out wen i saw him too..

eww