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[Fanfic] Sound Dues

Apr 12, 2013 22:17

Title: Sound Dues
Author: yuuago/Rukkilill/Roesslyng
Prompt: Denmark, Netherlands (/any nation) - Ships (1600s)
Other characters: None
Rating: 13+ ish for language and context.
Content notes: Takes place during the Battle of the Sound in 1658. ~1800 words.
Summary: Sometimes there just isn't anything you can do except wait for the wind to change - and ( Read more... )

language: english, 2013 submissions, fanfiction, non-nordic character, denmark

Comments 9

tinediserp April 13 2013, 04:41:45 UTC

OH NO they're such bros all of my love for these two idiots is bubbling up all over again Denmark all ":D :D :D NED HI I SEE THROUGH THAT" and Ned all "SHUT UP JUST-" ahhhhh "you came here on your own" it's too good

Oh right I live...typed:

hehehe ol News made me laugh, no idea why
echoing their jubilation through a sky that all through the day had rung with the sound of cannons. Dunno why but that was really perfect right there, like his towns echoing the way Denmark felt too or something maybe I'm reading too into it but wah!
but he tightened his hold on him and refused to let him do it Denmark pls you're embarrassing grow out of it already
He looked Denmark up and down, then frowned. "Y'look like shit." LOL OH I SEE WHAT THAT TWEET WAS ABOUT

Well this was a super productive comment gonna do read #2 now!!!

yuuago April 13 2013, 04:47:09 UTC

Buhyoo, you're cute. :)a Man if I didn't like them before, writing this would have made it, because just. alksdjf. I had fun with them.

(I want to write a sequel where they cuddle. Because Denmark is clingy as fuck right now.)

So glad you enjoyed it, that is a relief. It's like receiving a stamp of approval summed up as "Yes, I like this, and your Netherlands doesn't suck".

tinediserp April 13 2013, 05:05:11 UTC

Writing, so tricksy like that! If I don't like something/am neutral on something usually writing it will fix that right quick. And they are fun!! So dumb and goofy in completely different ways on the outside but so stubbornly set in Not Changing How They Act and oh gosh shutting up

(CUDDLES OMG DO IT it sounds both cute and like a total comedy of snarky errors!)

Not at all! I was going to say I was surprised but that sounds like I expected him to suck or something and I didn't at all so I need a better word here... or I could keep rambling until something good comes out... oh WHATEVER I thought you'd have a good grasp on him but I was ~surprised~ at just HOW much I really liked him here!!! Haha he kind of steals the show without even wanting to, which... makes sense given that we're following Denmark's attentions.

yuuago April 13 2013, 05:16:27 UTC

Noooo don't shut up, never shut up, I love hearing people talk about things they like. 8) Especially when those things that they like happen to be characters and pairings I want to write. 8)

(MAYBE I WILL if I can work it in, it isn't what I originally planned for the extended edition but -- on the other hand, I didn't quite decide how I wanted to end it, either. We'll have to see what happens!)

What a relief. :') I guess just paying attention and writing what felt right helped after all! I think it helped that I didn't have to actually get into his head too much (what a pain in the ass that'd be), I just had to focus on how Denmark feels about seeing him, mostly. :Va

moemoekyuun April 14 2013, 00:37:56 UTC

It's like a movie. I like it

yuuago April 14 2013, 00:39:49 UTC

"It's like a movie" - That's one of the most awesome things anyone's ever said about anything I've written. I'm so happy. :D

moemoekyuun April 14 2013, 00:47:53 UTC

wonderful. because speaking in paragraphs is hard.

kainoliero April 14 2013, 20:01:22 UTC

Oh my Bob. Oh all my Bobs this was amazing read! I was going to say something about how I was seeing everything as it happened but someone's already said it (although I would not have had the brain to compare it to a movie but if I had had the brain I would have wait where am I going with this text I don't know HI). :D

Anyway. Stories like this one are the reason I love your writing so much. I love the little worlds you create around them for the characters to live in and I love how your storyline ties itself so nicely at the end. Very pleasant read, this one. Awesome work.
(And OMG the bromance!)

yuuago April 15 2013, 00:54:51 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it. *_* It's always a relief to find out that it actually did exactly what I intended it to do.

(Bromance indeed <3 <3 <3 I should write these two more, ahhhh I love them to bits!)