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Oct 30, 2004 20:09

Post a memory of me.
It can be anything you want, just so long as it happened.

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countingstars91 October 30 2004, 22:55:02 UTC
scary picture on leena's photo-phone camera..at her birthday.
<3

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normalpeoplesuk October 30 2004, 22:57:24 UTC
ouch i wish you had a slightly mroe pleasent and good looking memory haha

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sickness_and October 30 2004, 23:05:32 UTC
but do you have the strength to finish another poem?
(silence will suffice, as a no).

a cold bench stands in solitude,
once greeted by the warmth of a lovers' embrace,
once graffitied with glossy varnish,
now, stands gazing at the inconstant waves,
fading as time progresses,
calling out to the night,
wondering why its representational lines
are not worthy,
from months of recognition,
months of rememberance,
months of being sit on,
an explanation to its gradual procedure of vanishing,
only facing the bitter response of silence

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normalpeoplesuk October 31 2004, 00:16:30 UTC
a cold bench stands in solitude,
once greeted by the warmth of a lovers' embrace,
once graffitied with glossy varnish,
now, stands gazing at the inconstant waves,
fading as time progresses,
calling out to the night,
wondering why its representational lines
are not worthy,
from months of recognition,
months of rememberance,
months of being sit on,
an explanation to its gradual procedure of vanishing,
only facing the bitter response of silence
as it fades it signals that the past is gone
and in its place is something changed
im tired of looking back
to find something to hold on too
3 lines was one to many
and so far you still havnt called out to me
you havnt asked why or appealed for another try
just took pictures of a lonley wet road
and im sitting here chilled to the bone

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sickness_and October 31 2004, 01:09:10 UTC
you can chill your own bones,
refuse to let me in,
and wonder, like our bench,
like a fading foundation,
why i cannot open up,
and why you cannot let me
is beyond the ocean
and it's bloody 3 lines
maybe they weren't enough for you
if you just let them talk
then maybe your bones would warm
and maybe we wouldn't be so frozen
but a chance may be too much
for your freezer
you just leave without notice,
ice cubes in my heart,
cold and fresh on a hot day just the way you like it
listen to your own requests
but listen now to your past
who beckons to you,
a history not worth repeating,
listen to her,
and maybe you'll learn something
about love,
about life,
about people,
about acceptance,
listen for once...
and maybe i will unfold,
maybe i will talk.
you live life by experiences...
don't try to experience before you live.
let me in,
and maybe,
if it fits your desire,
i'll be able to let you out.

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normalpeoplesuk October 31 2004, 01:23:26 UTC
its not like im impossible to reach

youve told me to "go away dont talk to me anymore why cant you jsut leave me alone" and i still kept talking

wheres you determination

maybe you need to learn something im sick of it always beign me saying sorry

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blondiebabie389 October 31 2004, 01:21:38 UTC
lets see probably the phone call right before me leaving for hawaii till like 3 in the morning :0)! haha

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