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Prompt Post 3

Jul 08, 2011 15:43

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Touch [1/5] skiesovergideon July 12 2011, 03:41:50 UTC

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The first time Loki holds his hand, Thor is three and Loki is just a baby. He is small but strong, and his little fingers wrap around one of Thor’s hard and tight enough to almost hurt. Thor doesn’t tell Mother this, though, because he doesn’t want Mother to think he’s small and weak.

Instead, he suffers the indignity quietly, a smile on his face as he faces Father’s court and Father announces that Loki is their new prince. He is too young to understand the glances the courtiers exchange, and he is too young to understand the meaning behind the whispers. When Mother tenses beside him, he presses closer to her and grins. Her smile is quick and fleeting, and he wonders why she doesn’t really smile, like she does when they’re alone ( ... )

Re: Touch [5/5] emerald_embers July 12 2011, 13:21:31 UTC

I have never more thoroughly enjoyed finding a gaping hole where my heart used to be.

This is absolutely, heart-destroyingly sad and beautiful. Thank you for writing this <3.

Re: Touch [5/5] skiesovergideon July 12 2011, 13:23:16 UTC

DDD8 Let me put your heart back, okay? You need that.

But thank you so much for the comment; I'm glad you enjoyed the story, heart-breaky-ness and all!

Re: Touch [5/5] emerald_embers July 12 2011, 13:28:08 UTC

I'm a surprisingly loquacious zombie, but okay ;).

And you are thoroughly welcome, it was gorgeously written and deserved commenting on <3.

Re: Touch [5/5] emerald_embers July 12 2011, 13:28:35 UTC

I probably ought to note that the gorgeously written part also makes me particularly excited by the possibility of your writing porny fills. :D

Re: Touch [5/5] korilian July 12 2011, 14:33:35 UTC

Wow I feel crazy sad after reading that, but it's a good hurt. ♥

Re: Touch [5/5] skiesovergideon July 12 2011, 15:12:42 UTC

I feel like I need to write some straight up crack to make up for the pain I cause all of you lovely people D8 BUT I'M GLAD THE PAIN IS A GOOD KIND OF PAIN. I think.

Re: Touch [5/5] kit1126 July 12 2011, 18:23:01 UTC

OH GOD THAT IS SO BEAUTIFULLY SAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD.

Re: Touch [5/5] astolat July 12 2011, 23:27:34 UTC

ohhhh ;____; <3 <3 <3

Re: Touch [5/5] teetersslow July 14 2011, 21:23:21 UTC

absolutely stunning. so heart-breakingly amazing!

Re: Touch [5/5] pockyhorrors July 15 2011, 05:51:55 UTC

I am an angst-monster when it comes to fills, so I immediately liked this, but the way you portrayed their relationship, with the sadness and hate fused so completely with their love for one another made me fall in love with it. A fantastic fill my Drop Dead Diva friend!

Re: Touch [5/5] dogmatix_san July 15 2011, 20:26:18 UTC

;__________________;

Re: Touch [5/5] etrangere July 16 2011, 20:17:39 UTC

this is gorgeous.

Re: Touch [5/5] xmoonveilx July 17 2011, 19:19:14 UTC

Oh god I can't stop the tears from falling. ;___;

But on the bright side, at least Thor held back onto Loki in the end.
For a minute there I almost thought he would walk away without a word, and that might have killed me.

Re: Touch [5/5] etharei September 29 2011, 17:28:35 UTC

cryyyying omg, this is so beautiful ♥

Re: Touch [5/5] strude October 16 2011, 06:47:32 UTC

I will forever love this angst. This was so freaking perfect and well done. I loved it. The ones where they are little kids were to cute, so cute it hurt my lady parts. I love them as kids all buddy buddy and friends and the best brothers ever. > w < I love broken Thor/Loki too, them older and so full of hurt. UGUU! Why is this so amazing. ALL my LOVE. ALL MY LOVE . . .

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