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Round 9

May 16, 2012 22:13

THIS ROUND IS CLOSED TO NEW PROMPTS

Round 10 will be up in about a week. We'll have a friending meme up in the next couple of days, and we'll be discussing hiring new mods to deal with the influx of members and prompts.

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FILL: Wandering Child, part 1/?? anonymous May 25 2012, 11:19:47 UTC

I hope I'm not stepping on anyone's toes. /o\ the idea just really caught me. this first part is mostly ensemble, and I haven't written much ensemble at all, so it's a leetle clunky. it'll even out, promise ( ... )

Re: FILL: Wandering Child, part 1/?? anonymous May 25 2012, 11:21:20 UTC

Here's the thing: without the cape and all the leather and buckles, Loki is tiny. Frail, even, and the points of his collarbones look about to cut through the shirt ( ... )

Re: FILL: Wandering Child, part 1/?? anonymous May 25 2012, 11:23:08 UTC

Tony blinked. "That's a bit low. Isn't it ( ... )

Re: FILL: Wandering Child, part 1/?? anonymous May 25 2012, 11:24:23 UTC

There was a distinctly undoctorly wince, and Tony took his heel off Bruce's instep. "All right, look, let's not get all worked up. This is SHIELD, and clerical errors? Not beyond them. Let's get another set done. He's cooperating, right?"

"Yes," Steve said. "But if he is a kid --"

"XRAYS FIRST FREAK OUT LATER," Tony bellowed. "Am the only smart person here? No, don't answer that, it's obvious. We'll get an independent batch, hell, grab a portable one, we'll do it ourselves, see what's going on. Hour tops."

Steve looked like he'd rather be in another meeting with Fury. "Someone has to go with him in case. I'll do it, but I need a partner."

"I will," Natasha said, and efficiently crowded everyone back so she could stand up, ignoring Tony's wounded hiss. "Ready when you are, Captain."

"I hope you're wrong," Clint said.

Tony grimaced, watching them go. They were hilariously mismatched, but they had teamwork going for them and it wasn't like SHIELD was going to do any better. "Me too."

Re: FILL: Wandering Child, part 1/?? cancerjanus May 25 2012, 12:00:03 UTC

Tony's right, X-rays first freak out later.

Re: FILL: Wandering Child, part 1/?? toitsu May 25 2012, 13:03:21 UTC

oh, this is good, but the part about 18 kilos bugs me a little, especially on that height. magic or not, he would be dead.

Re: FILL: Wandering Child, part 1/?? anonymous May 25 2012, 13:39:27 UTC

this is the fault of my bad writing, sorry I was unclear! the armour itself weighs that, he doesn't. I'm figuring Loki at about 65 kilos-ish.

I took the armour weight from hiddleston's account of how much his costume weighed. (he said 'forty pounds' in interviews; I converted and rounded.) don't worry, the only way I'd write him as eighteen kilos is as tiny-babee-Loki. XD

Re: FILL: Wandering Child, part 1/?? toitsu May 25 2012, 13:43:00 UTC

oh. sorry XD

now it feels a lot better

Re: FILL: Wandering Child, part 2/?? anonymous May 25 2012, 13:31:20 UTC

second part already. sorry they're so short! let's see if I got the nesting right ( ... )

Re: FILL: Wandering Child, part 2/?? anonymous May 25 2012, 13:32:36 UTC

"It won't hurt," Steve told him ( ... )

Re: FILL: Wandering Child, part 2/?? anonymous May 25 2012, 14:53:49 UTC

For ... reasons, mostly to do with the fact that Tony's issues around child endangerment were close enough to his that they wouldn't be shouting at cross-purposes, Bruce showed them to him first, tucked in a conference room with enough lights and glass for Tony to cannibalise into a decent lightbox ( ... )

Re: FILL: Wandering Child, part 2/?? yersi_fanel May 25 2012, 15:54:45 UTC

Wow, I love your Tony's voice, I can see him saying those things and in general your story looks great, I totally want to read more.

Re: FILL: Wandering Child, part 2/?? anonymous May 25 2012, 16:16:59 UTC

Other!Author!Anon here!
I am loving this other fill, please do continue!
<3
I may have to stop reading your fill though, lest I start unconciously cadging from it! :P
Loved the way you described the scans, I had to start skimming at that point because I am in the middle of writing the same bits. XD (Conflicted writer/reader problems, eh?)

Re: FILL: Wandering Child, part 2/?? anonymous May 26 2012, 12:10:32 UTC

please continue yours, I love it! <3

Re: FILL: Wandering Child, part 2/?? anonymous May 25 2012, 17:31:46 UTC

Bruce goes to find Clint while Tony does his best Obnoxious to ward off Fury from getting too interested in anything to do with anybody else ever. (Sometimes Bruce isn't sure Tony's faking, and he knows that Tony doesn't know either ( ... )

Re: FILL: Wandering Child, part 2/?? anonymous May 25 2012, 19:58:37 UTC

OP here!

This second fill is great! I think you've got most of the characters spot on, their reactions exactly what I would imagine them to be. And your dialogue...damn! I agree with the others, it's very easy to imagine Tony's voice saying all this witty lines.

I'll be sitting up waiting for more!:D

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