Descriptions to be added? slow pace a bit?

[northern_magic]

Swish, sshh, sshhsshh. The water spiraled into a silent, hypnotic swirl, receding back down the walls of the glass bottle as the Doctor passed it to Rose. Shh, shh, she shook it from side to side; the water crept back up again.

"Not half as much fun as particle accelerators," said the Doctor, watching Rose spin the bottle upside down and every which

Comments

[kesshin_shinobu]

Oh, this is amazing. Lovely, lovely stuff, Rose.
Hmm...
I think I need to write out a bit about the Doctor and Rose's trip to Jupiter. Like, NOW.
*scurries off*
Oh, and I'll be posting the link to this intro of yours on my LJ. Is that all right?

[northern_magic]

Perfectly. Completely. Post away. =D

And I'll see about filling this out a bit- I'm still not completely settled into writing Rose's voice (er, hers; I've given up on figuring out mine).