Kiss

[northsealily]

Kiss

Short one shot written for LoveFest. Canon, rating **. Tent sex. Sorry, no kinks. Appx. 700 words.

Ennis and Jack are Annie Proulx's characters. This is the first time I've written fiction since I was 10.

I’m almost awake. I feel like I did sometimes when I was eight years old, it’s nice and warm. I hear something; momma is putting more wood

Comments

Gorgeous

[lolitaray]

Oh this was just so lovely.

Mine are all buttoned up because I wanted to hide the mess on my stomach.

I can totally see Ennis doing this. And the breathing and the wind. Just beautiful honey. Thank you. Thank you so much.

I adore canon and this canon was an absolute delight.

Re: Gorgeous

[northsealily]

Thank you, Lolita! I worship your canon so this is a huge compliment. I'm blushing here.

I love canon too. I don't think I'll ever get tired of it.

[acquaalta]

OMG, this was so lovely.
Beautiful. And sooo Ennis & Jack.

I don’t understand how he can do these things. I can’t say anything because I can’t even think about it, but the want is there and it scares me.

I saw the pictures just as in the movie in my mind's eye all the time while reading.
Thank you for sharing. B.

[northsealily]

Thank you! I'm so happy you thought it felt like Ennis & Jack.

[sweetje]

I love a shy Ennis. There's something so charming about Ennis when he is hesitant to give in to his desire for Jack. But I'm always glad that he overcomes his anxiety.
Sweet story. Thank you. : )
Debra

[northsealily]

Yeah, shy Ennis can't help himself with Jack...

Thank you!

[tatia85]

Awww... this is so cute! Ennis being all shy, and Jack so sweet and loving. Very gentle sex. Love, I would say. I bet that is what Jack was telling to Ennis.
Very lovely written, too! We can feel all of Ennis ansiety, all his desire and wanting.
Beautiful

[northsealily]

Thank you! Actually I'm not sure what Jack said. I just thought it would be fun to have Ennis run so full-throttle that he can't even hear very well. ;D

I'm glad you thought there was love in the tent. :)

[northsealily]

Thank you! Ennis is so clueless that Jack has to give him a push. ;D But he's also 19!