Every Day

[nosside]

I live my day
with this loathsome feeling
in the pit of my stomach.
I breath every day
this toxic air
coming from the Factories of hate,
all around me.
I talk with you every day,
but my words are muffled 
by the acid in my mouth.
I wake up every morning
and nothing change.
Everything stays still.
Nothing disobeys the Law of Hate.

Comments

[copycatalyst]

This is really good, also.
Stop being good at writing, and leave some talent for the rest of us. xD
Just kidding - I'm jealous because I haven't been able to write anything for awhile. -__-

[nosside]

It happens to me too. when my Muse flee, I could bomb out her house but she wouldn't come out!

[revanlady]

That's a really good poem. I like the descriptions.

[nosside]

thanks! I didn't know how they come out 'cause I wrote this on a whim.

[revanlady]

I find that the best poetry comes from a whim like that ^^

[nuiigurumii]

I enjoyed this. Great job! :)

[nosside]

WoW I totally missed your comment...Thanks ... even if so late.