This was really great. I like the idea of them not kissing at the party. Will be very interesting to see how their relationship will develop now :) Hope you continue it :)
:O :O :O :O This is the one dedicated to me!!!! AWWWWW!!! Thanks :D
I am actualy really liking where this is going! I think you should DEFINATELY continue. I would like to see a less-bitter-more-emily-nice Naomi :D
You write really well aswell :D I wouldnt have known you were American, some of the English slang made me laugh, knowing you wouldnt use it over there lol :P
Whenever I do continue this, they'll get happier :D I was trying to capture poor little 14 year old emily LOL! If she was that sad looking (where you just want to hug her!) in the first episode, just imagine an even more insecure younger emily right around when Katie became a skank LOL! That's how I imagined it anyway.
And so glad that my faux english wasn't too noticeable. When I started writing this it was after I had watch skins 3 like 987349857893745 times (mostly the naomily scenes >.> LOLOL) so in my head it just flowed naturally. But if I were to try to say this shit out loud it would be horrifically embarrassing LMAO!
I'll try to write some more soon, and when I do I'll let my dedicatee know ;D
hahahahaha! Some scenes..sex scenes..ahem! Are really hard to write without some literal LOL moments in your bedroom! :P
DW, I had visions of cute little Emily...I always seem to when I hear that girls name mentioned :P Kind of weird, considering I was going to be called Emily :l kind of was for a little while lol!
LOL! I'm just picturing you bursting out laughing and your parents waking up and being like 'WTF ARE YOU DOING?!' they'll use their parent x-ray vision and instantly know you're writing smut! lmao
Whenever I get to the sexytimes that this fic will inevitably have, it'll definitely be a new experience... being lesbian and all LOL! I wrote a love scene in my first fic when I was like 17, and looking back at it now it's mildly cringe-worthy XD! Let's hope this one won't be as bad.
And how fun is that that you were almost an emily! It must be fate ;D I have a strong fondness for that name now, whereas before I was neutral on it. I wish I could see pictures of little kat, meg, and lily! That'd be so adorable. The image of little goth!kat and little ghettodancer!lily in drama classes together makes me LOL forever XD!
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Like, barbies aren't even terrifying now, just hilarious.
Thanks for this
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I havnt actually read yet, but I shall :D
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Let me know when you do! I'd like to know if I captured the inner torment of a 14 year old emily >:D!! BWHAHA lmao
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I'll try and write more soon!
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I am actualy really liking where this is going! I think you should DEFINATELY continue. I would like to see a less-bitter-more-emily-nice Naomi :D
You write really well aswell :D I wouldnt have known you were American, some of the English slang made me laugh, knowing you wouldnt use it over there lol :P
Please continue........:) :) :)
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Whenever I do continue this, they'll get happier :D I was trying to capture poor little 14 year old emily LOL! If she was that sad looking (where you just want to hug her!) in the first episode, just imagine an even more insecure younger emily right around when Katie became a skank LOL! That's how I imagined it anyway.
And so glad that my faux english wasn't too noticeable. When I started writing this it was after I had watch skins 3 like 987349857893745 times (mostly the naomily scenes >.> LOLOL) so in my head it just flowed naturally. But if I were to try to say this shit out loud it would be horrifically embarrassing LMAO!
I'll try to write some more soon, and when I do I'll let my dedicatee know ;D
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DW, I had visions of cute little Emily...I always seem to when I hear that girls name mentioned :P Kind of weird, considering I was going to be called Emily :l kind of was for a little while lol!
Yes! Defo keep me updated on any updates :P
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Whenever I get to the sexytimes that this fic will inevitably have, it'll definitely be a new experience... being lesbian and all LOL! I wrote a love scene in my first fic when I was like 17, and looking back at it now it's mildly cringe-worthy XD! Let's hope this one won't be as bad.
And how fun is that that you were almost an emily! It must be fate ;D I have a strong fondness for that name now, whereas before I was neutral on it. I wish I could see pictures of little kat, meg, and lily! That'd be so adorable. The image of little goth!kat and little ghettodancer!lily in drama classes together makes me LOL forever XD!
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