Torchwood fic: 'Wants' Jack/Ianto NC-17

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Title: Wants
Fandom: Torchwood
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Warnings: Spanking, D/S, Toys, Rimming
Rating: NC-17, 7,600 words
A/N: This is the followup to parts 1&2 on the TouchYerWood kink meme. Jack trains Ianto to be his begging bottom submissive. Post-Cyberwoman.
1st part - First Punishment
2nd part - Second Error
3rd part - Needs

Comments

[gement]

Oh my lordy, a real live proper safeword freakout. Thank you.

It ain't edgeplay if you don't find an edge someday, and when no one's actually negotiating out loud... You just tipped over from fun smut into Real People(tm) for me.

(My only concrit is that I'm having trouble hearing the cadence of how Jack would say "bottom" rather than butt or ass, but I'll probably get the hang of it in time.)

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Yes, I just had so much ass, ass, ass! :)

Good to keep that in mind though, some words do throw people out of a story!

[woodencoyote]

Honestly, though, what was Jack think would happen? He had just spoken to Gwen and knew she was coming over (and soon, because she'd just bought takeaway). She would have to arrive during the sex, so Jack should have expected the interuption. And why did he not think Ianto would be upset, when he almost used the safeword the last time? It seems like Jack is expecting an unreasonable amount of trust from Ianto, and too soon.

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True, but I don't think Jack realizes yet what Ianto's buttons are...some people can get off on discovery. But secondly, I think she arrived earlier than expected, before Jack could say something to Ianto (and he didn't want to ruin the mood/roleplay).

What Jack really wants is to get Ianto off, really -- he does NOT want to be hurtful at all -- but he pushed the wrong button there.

[hab318princess]

wow, that was brain meltingly hot