Here's the end of the story Testing What I Know, it was written before Monday the 28th Dec 09, before everything changed, but I wanted to put it up before the end of the year, bit of closure on everything for me anyways.
I sincerely want to thank anybody who read this story I wrote and let me know what yous thought, your comments kept me working on
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It only took me so long to get written because I wanted to make sure I had all my loose ends tied up, kinda had to put it up seeing as I finished it.
Thanks for encouraging me to finish it, cuz when I started, the idea of even getting a page written seemed unachievable, and now look! it's a bit longer than a page methinks. I feel strangely accomplished finishing something that I wanted to do for me, ya know?
It kind of wrapps up 2009 for me too,
Thskn you for reading and letting me know what you thought all the way through
Happy New Year :) Xxx
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I'm glad you liked the ending <3
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honestly, i wouldn't mind another five chapters just detailing their lives from here. :)
congratulations on finishing this, it's an amazing story.
xoxo
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Funny you should say that, I'm having trouble turning it off in my head, I keep coming up with what happens next:0
I'm still not really sure what'll happen with the fandoms, whether it's alright to keep going, business as usual, or start on anything new, but I suppose I'll just have to wait and see:)
You're amazing, *Mwah* :D Xxx
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I'm glad he came across as funny, cuz that's how it was intended. His character's so strong that his parts were the easiest to write. Thank you for sticking with the story to the end <3
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&& this is probably my favorite chapter out of them all. it kind of felt like the climax in a good movie, with the different character focuses, and i love how everything fit in the end.
the jimmy-zack interaction has to be my favorite part of this chapter, too. i think one reason is that most people are like, "&& we told our friends && some of them freaked, some of them accepted it, but everything wound up okay, etc.," whereas here you used zack && jimmy's little argument to do that. also, it was fucking great that while brent was tearing (what was left of the house) apart, zack had it the whole time--&& then just gave it to away to jimmy. XD
so, yeah. my two-cents: this = yes. <3
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"climax in a good movie"- excellent that's what I was going for! A lifetime of too much television had to have some lasting effects, right?
Thank you for appreciating the lil details, and for the wonderful feedback
Your two cents= priceless!;)
<3
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