Fic - NC-17 - Glee - Puck/Rachel - Underneath (part four)

[not_poignant]

Title: Underneath (part 4)
Rating: NC-17
Fandom: Glee
Pairing: Puck/Rachel
Genre: Aaaaaaaangst, Smut
Spoilers: throughout early season 1, pre Mattress, since this was written before it had happened. So, AU? I’m just lazy about putting fiction up, sorry!
Warnings: Smexin', and, aaaaaaangst.
Word Count: 3293

Author's Note / Summary: Feedback makes

Comments

[jaws_of_fenrir]

Yay! I'm so happy you updated! Verra good, theses two angst off of each other very nicely. I love it that Puck just doesn't quit fucking up and Rachel is by no means perfect. This just 3 kinds of great. Keep writing!! Please. :)

[not_poignant]

Thank you! Next chapter is up. Woot!

[lunamystik]

What stood out most for me here was Finn insulting Rachel's choice - what right does he have? And then Puck being all mean about her - which was totally expected, but was probably him just lashing out. I really loved how he called Finn out with this line: "what is your fucking magic power? It’s like they’re high or something."

[not_poignant]

What stood out most for me here was Finn insulting Rachel's choice - what right does he have?

Ah epic teenage angst, it's all about 'how to blame other people for everything going wrong in your life,' from memory. Maybe I was just a really shitty teenager. ;)

[not_poignant]

Heh, thank you! I love angst way too much. *blush* But I'm also a sucker for happy endings. Or at least, not really dire character death type endings.

[tracysgate]

you stopped there?
no.....
please tell me theres more comming soon. cant wait to see if rachel has really dropped the finn blinders.
i doubt finn will keep his mouth shut about this either. hows everyone else going to take it?
ooooh intrigue :P

[not_poignant]

you stopped there?

I truly suck. But in good news, the next chapter is up. Huzzah! :D

[fuzzy_paint]

Is it sad that I'm happy about the ANGST? Yes. Yes it is. God. These two just know how to hurt so well.

Puck was like that. Poison. GUH! He's bad for you baby, but you just can't stay away!

You think anyone at this school could keep up with you? It's like he knows>/i> she's too good for him.

Forgetting the condom: AHAHA! Priceless.

And then they all tear into each other and it's gold. Pure angsty nugget of GOLD.

[fuzzy_paint]

oops, html fail!

[not_poignant]

Is it sad that I'm happy about the ANGST?

We can be happy and sad together! :D