Fic - NC-17 - Glee - Puck/Rachel - Underneath (final, part five)

[not_poignant]

Title: Underneath (part 5/5 - final part)
Rating: NC-17
Fandom: Glee
Pairing: Puck/Rachel
Genre: Angst, Smut
Spoilers: throughout early season 1, pre Mattress, since this was written before it had happened. It’s totally AU now!
Warnings: Smexin'
Word Count: 4521

Author's Note / Summary: Feedback makes me write more fiction. It’s a proven fact.

Comments

[knkykty]

OMG the end was perfect. That IS the kind of guy he is. LOL.

And go for it on the meme. I got flamed for purple prose, we're taking a break from each other. ;) LOL.

Awesome, as always...

[not_poignant]

I got flamed for purple prose, we're taking a break from each other. ;) LOL.

Really? Man, people are so 'grateful' sometimes. Fanfiction is a free service, done without any payment (except comments, really). But a lot of readers forget that and come from a place of what I like to happily think of as 'stupid entitlement.'

Stupid entitlement. *grumbles*

[knkykty]

Most importantly -- ICON LOVE. LMAO.

And yep, someone was looking for something more in the kink realm, and I write a Puckleberry smut series that's definitely one of the kinkier things out there, so I suggested it. And then got flamed. *shakes head*

You're so right about fanfiction being a free service! That's exactly what I told myself between curses. They can go buy a damn book then. LOL.

I've still got quite the stockpile of prompts, and I'll get there. But whether I post the fill? Different story. =P

Enjoy! And thanks for that. Stupid entitlement. *notes the phrase for future reference*

[fuzzy_paint]

So. Fantastic.

The smut was gloriously hot (like it has been for the entirety of this story) and really, who could ask for more than that. But you gave more than that, and I LOVE IT! I love the connection you forged between the two of them, especially how it didn't end in boyfriend/girlfriend but as friends-with-benefits sort of thing (though my shipper heart is convinced that it's not going to be long before that changes, even if neither of them admit to it).

Great ending line!

Fantastic job!

[not_poignant]

Wa-hey! I love these two. I don't know if the scriptwriters are ever going to do anything more with them than the tantalising hints we've seen but that's okay, for this reason there is fanfiction! :D

[lunamystik]

Yeah, I think this "friends with lots of benefits" think could really work for both of them... Loved this story, you did a great job with it.

[not_poignant]

Yeah, I think this "friends with lots of benefits" think could really work for both of them

It was the only way I could make it work in my head anyway!

[ophelia1234]

SO glad you gave me a head's up that you updated this! Another great chapter.

[not_poignant]

Thank you! :D

[kdmr87]

I loved every second of this story! It was hot sexy amazing. The way Puck and Rachel were with each other... so ugh really good! The sexual tension and during sex and after sex.... it was so hot funny and just them. They way you wrote them are so like the actual show, which is even more amazing... Okay I'm rambling so I'm just gonna go and read it all over again lol
Hope you write more delicious Puckleberry XD

[not_poignant]

Thank you so much! And I will write more Puckleberry! I've just put up a standalone, though it's different tonally to this one.

I don't know why I love this pairing so much. :D