(Untitled)

Dec 14, 2010 01:16

Title: Dinner
Characters: Holmes and Moriarty
Word Count: 1401
Series: Training the Pet
Rating: Adult for drug use and force
Warnings: Drug use, slash
Summary: Moriarty asks a favour of a friend. Not his own friend. Part 5 in the series

A Bite Out )

Leave a comment

Comments 17

lady_t_220 December 14 2010, 14:04:23 UTC
Ooooh, Jim, you bastard...

Reply

nota_faerietale December 14 2010, 17:52:52 UTC
And yet so fun to write!

Reply


darthhellokitty December 14 2010, 16:19:55 UTC
Oh, god, this is BRUTAL...

Perhaps him hitting send on the text had done something horrific, making Sherlock the instrument of destruction unbeknownst to him.

Wouldn't put it past him... well, destruction of Sherlock, isn't it?

The part about the grains of sugar... GOD.

Reply

nota_faerietale December 14 2010, 17:54:29 UTC
Sherlock though thinks he can handle this, knowing he got someone like Watson or Mrs Hudson killed might have been another. I considered using that but Sherlock would have demanded proof.

I'm glad you liked that part!

Reply


errantcomment December 14 2010, 21:05:01 UTC
Oh man, so psychological.
Lovely to see this again.
You got Jim down pretty well too- I find him one of the harder characters to write, so I'm always impressed when people write him well.
Thanks.

Reply

nota_faerietale December 15 2010, 04:31:35 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad to hear that. I always worry I'll do him some injustice because I have so much respect for the fandom.

Reply


mme_saberage December 21 2010, 20:35:28 UTC
Oh, I can't believe I haven't commented on this part yet. Great work!
I'm at loss, though, I thought Moriarty was trying to make John believe Sherlock was not abducted (the phone call last chapter?).
Suspense, suspense. Love it!

Reply

nota_faerietale December 22 2010, 04:46:54 UTC
So glad you're enjoying!

In truth it is part of setting them both up for Sherlock's return to John, of which Jim has every intention of doing. So all of it is about setting them both up for the inevitable return.

Reply

mme_saberage December 26 2010, 21:25:46 UTC
Mh, I see. Or actually I don't. I have no idea where this is heading. And I absolutely think this is a very good thing.

Reply


minetruly December 30 2010, 21:43:14 UTC
Oh no. I've caught up. Now I have to wait for each chapter to come out.

You are truly an expert at torture.

Reply

nota_faerietale December 31 2010, 05:26:39 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Now that the holidays are over, I should have time to get more of these finished.

Thank you! So much. Odd as it sounds, that means a lot.

Reply

minetruly January 23 2011, 23:16:29 UTC
It's been almost a month since your last update! Please don't leave us hanging. You're weaving a very interesting story here, and I can't imagine how it will play out.

Reply

nota_faerietale March 3 2011, 19:34:14 UTC
I swear I'm still working on this. Medication for some health issues has been messing with my attention span but I am still working.

Sorry for the delay.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up