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Dec 16, 2010 18:08



I Missed You As Soon As You Started To Go
(By Buzzy, N.A.S.)

I missed you as soon as you started to go;
The sites on the cannon were bent.
The cannon went off,
But the hive stayed behind -
Now the bees all refuse to pay rent.

I missed you as soon as you started to go;
I know that is sad, but it's true.
The boat's gone with the tide
And the glue is all ( Read more... )

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kittenkissies December 17 2010, 10:32:54 UTC
From the heart of a notaskwerl. Who could ask for more.

ok. actually, it is very well written.

some of your (shudder) best work.

seriously.

merry notaskwerlmas

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notasquirrel December 17 2010, 23:22:25 UTC
*preen*

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deor December 18 2010, 00:08:35 UTC
*applause*

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notasquirrel December 18 2010, 01:58:53 UTC
*gives you a gratitude lick*

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fluffy_cloud December 22 2010, 00:44:14 UTC
You need some really cool spectacles or vision enhancing goggles. That would really help improve your aim.

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notasquirrel December 23 2010, 02:11:17 UTC
excellint - ive alredee rittun toe santaa!

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dorothy_parka December 23 2010, 23:19:05 UTC
this was lovely and evocative. I like how the poem's rhythm emulates the rhythm of tearing apart and chewing.

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